insanebutvain, The Dramatist

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6/12/2014

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7/16/2018 9:16 PM

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i live in: sydney, australia

i am: not that great of a writer, a hopeless procrastinator, a low-key alcoholic

love: plants, my dog

at any given time I am: in a fierce emotional battle between working and hating myself 

songs: temper temper by lime cordiale, smoko by the chats

currently "working on": barathrum

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Atramentous

at•ra•men•tous

adjective

1. Of or pertaining to ink; inky; black, like ink; as, atraental galls; atramentous spots.

Insane is an understatement.

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DO NOT READ THIS IF YOU ARE UNDER THE AGE OF 16. CONTAINS HEAVY GORE, MILD COARSE LANGUAGE, DEAD CHILDREN AND DARK THEMES. 


Dispiteous

dis•pit•e•ous

adjective, Archaic.

1. malicious; cruel; pitiless.

This little girl has Daddy issues. 

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DO NOT READ THIS IF YOU ARE UNDER THE AGE OF 18. CONTAINS EXPLICIT SEXUAL CONTENT, HEAVY GORE, COARSE LANGAGE, DEAD CHILDREN AND INCEST. 

Originally written for Morgan_R's 90 minute challenge. This took closer to two hours, but I'm hoping it might still be a contender. 

Kudos to @Romulus for reading through an earlier version of the story. 

If anyone thinks I should edit the story to be less intense, PM me or leave it in the comments. I was a bit unsure about publishing this, but hey, fuck it. 


Recent Posts

Vain is an EPIC procrastinator ! on 7/16/2018 7:31:02 AM
Sunday, July 15: Update #3 on story progress and what you like most about your story so far Story is progressing. Has changed a bit from the initial brief but I like where it's going. Enjoying the freedom to have the characters explore the world, provides a bit of relief from school work.

Vain is an EPIC procrastinator ! on 7/1/2018 7:08:30 PM
Sunday, July 1: Update #2 on story progress and any issues in the writing process: Story is sitting at about 3k, far less than I had hoped for but with school over for a few weeks I should be able to get more words down. Going nicely so far but the scripting is annoying and will take some extra work to sort out. Still motivated to work on it, just haven't had the time, so hopefully I should be still on track to get a complete story in and actually enter the contest!!

Vain is an EPIC prostitute! on 7/1/2018 7:05:09 PM
I'm at an all-girls school, so wouldn't be as many customers I think.

Vain is an EPIC procrastinator ! on 6/27/2018 8:14:53 AM
Doesn't really work with the custom name though :/

Vain is an EPIC procrastinator ! on 6/27/2018 8:14:33 AM
Oh yeah thanks haha

Vain is an EPIC procrastinator ! on 6/27/2018 6:26:18 AM
Yeah, I've done that but I don't think one variable can change so many different options if that makes sense? At the moment I have a different variable for all the things I mentioned above, and then have to use a different code bit when I'm writing the base text. Looks kinda crazy: The only one they left was %%HERHIM%=%1%her%%%%HERHIM%=%2%him%%, I don’t know why. But %%SHEHE%=%1%she%%%%SHEHE%=%2%he%% looks like %%SHEHE%=%1%she%%%%SHEHE%=%2%he%% hasn’t been hurt, so I bought %%HERHIM%=%1%her%%%%HERHIM%=%2%him%% back here.”

Vain is an EPIC procrastinator ! on 6/27/2018 4:40:04 AM
Aight, 3k words and a bunch of pain in the ass scripting, including changes between male and female pronouns. I kinda regret having that option, cause its super annoying to have a bunch of variables for like she/he, her/he, his/hers, his/her, her/him, and capitalised versions of all these, then implementing them all into the story. Anyway complaining over, story writing is going well and should have a bunch more words before the check in date on the first.

Corgi's EPIC story side plots on 6/26/2018 11:49:45 PM
Yeah, outlined everything and then scripting is taking a while. I'll try to follow your advice, because clearly it works.

Corgi's EPIC story side plots on 6/26/2018 11:14:47 PM
Holy shit, you've written 26k already? I've done literally 2k. How have you managed this?

Vain is an EPIC procrastinator ! on 6/25/2018 8:31:09 PM
Okay so, little update: Players now have the option to enter a custom name for one of the characters! Some names will impact the story to a minor degree, not gonna say which ones though - you gotta play for yourself and try to find out. I can still fit in a few more 'special' names, anyone have any suggestions? The first few I have are related to users on the site. Anyway word count wise I still have a way to go, but I've got some solid background planning and shit.