Player Comments on The Animal Says What? (1)

Your story game was off to a good start. What I didn't like was that no matter what animal I picked I got an end game. I think you need more story and more choices. What is so interesting about the animals? What does the comet have to do with the story? I did not like how the story ended. I feel like you had a great start but then it just ended and that made no sense to me.

You received a yuK! On the NomNom scale. You author won't probably be reading this at all... but why did you publish your story if it wasn't even finished? Also your writing isn't bad, but because you have a horrible plot,you writing sucks. At least you could have told the reader that you gave up on the story because like you said it's really short.

Everything leads to the same ending...

All the choices lead to the same thing...

Did I beat the game or was that a bad ending? I can't tell.

So, there's this massive cliff hanger. The discription is makes you think the story starts at the commet, but spoiler, the game ends with no explination as soon as the commet is mentioned.

Its nice

Very well written & entertaining. But definately needs a part 2 & more actual choices.

Too short.

Wow! That was great!

I really liked it, but it was way too short.

Sorry, I can't rate this high. It's really good, but there's just nothing there. I'd say you should make one long game instead of a series of little games.

It was pretty short, and there were grammar mistakes, but it's pretty well written

Why must you torture me with cliffhangers!?

There were a few grammar errors like all stories but its really good. Great job! ;3

First of all, why is this in love and dating? Second,if you want a higher rating, join the parts together

I gave it a 5. Good, but too short,
Your friendly, neighborhood gorilla

I like it. *grins*

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