galobtter, The Journeyman Scrivener

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I miss the writing prompts on 1/4/2017 1:31:31 AM

You can always use the writing prompts subreddit if you want prompts..


Ads? on 2/17/2016 2:49:11 AM

thedailywtf.com


multiples of the same item? on 2/8/2016 1:48:41 PM

Can't you increase the number of times the rabbit skin can be used the more you collect it? 


Week Two Feedback on 10/5/2015 12:12:26 PM

It took all of my willpower to not get sucked into tvtropes. Every trope page had some interesting sounding links..


Writing Exercises Restart - Week Two on 10/5/2015 12:04:25 PM

Superbonus:
Perspective 1:
Tsuki immediately located the Dr. Mogambo's lair from his position on the helicopter. Despite being blind, he had super senses and detected the faint, but distinctive voice of Mogambo over the din of the hundreds of helicopters surrounding his. A plane would have been much more efficient to transport the hundreds of the army he had brought, but he mused, "When you can take a helicopter(or hundreds), why use a mere plane?"

Returning to executing the plan, he shouted through into the microphone "His lair is in the north-east, but lets make our presence known. Crash the helicopters on the surrounding town."
You see, Mogambo was planning reduce Earth to a barren wasteland and Tsuki wanted to pressure Mogambo into using his plan B--nukes. These could be sent back and destroy his bio-virus which was his plan A (and the rest of the country, but Tsuki thought "Eh, that's a small price.")


A few minutes later, noticing the lack of nukes, Tsuki contemplated Mogambo's new-found intelligence.
What a fool he was to really thought I would come myself, and not my sidekick, to deal with his initial plan to rule europe...but he has become wiser.
He ran dancing past the invisible laser trap outside and then inside detected where Mogambo was. His army was distracting Mogambo's army on the outside.
He then suddenly stopped in shock. "Tsuki is an alien," Mogambo laughed out loud from his location far away. How could he know that? But it didn't matter at least. Mogambo and all his henchmen were going die soon.
He sent a message to his sidekick Kyumoto through telepathy, "Send your laser to the dome area in the center."
This was more tiresome than the nukes, but would kill less.
Tsuki channeled a mysterious force to dome and the combination of the force and laser vaporized the dome and everything inside--the bio-virus, nukes, Mogambo and his henchmen.

 

Perspective 2:
Josh leaned back in his seat in the helicopter, but the seat toppled over and he grabbed the side of the exit with his heart pumping. Not only had he have to board this shitty helicopter, instead of a much more efficient and comfortable plane, the seat couldn't even support even leaning back. And then he heard Tsuki's voice through the comms "His lair is in the north-east, but lets make our presence known. Crash the helicopters on the surrounding town."
What the fuck? Was this dude mad? Does he even know how much these helicopters cost? And the damage it would cause to the countryside?? Aren't superheroes supposed to have intelligence?
He sighed, grabbed a parachute and leaped off.
Once he had landed he received another order to fight Mogambo's troops.
Why?? He can dodge them so easily with his supersense and speed and all. They can't stun him with light because he's blind.. Why sacrifice troops because of laziness? Why were we even here? He already sacrificed europ--.
A bullet whizzed over his head, shocking him out of his thoughts.
I'm going to fight, but not Mogambo's troops, but Tsuki.
He ran and ran slowly reaching Mogambo's lair, but was interrupted by a voice saying something surprising--"Tsuki is a alien."--but he had no time to react, as he was instantly killed by the shockwave from vaporization of the villain's dome.


Writing Exercises Restart on 9/23/2015 11:51:00 PM

I'll join.


FML on 9/5/2015 12:33:42 PM

Well if you're not scared of cockroaches, you could create a cockroach infestation and they keep the ant numbers down.


New Site Guidelines on 8/25/2015 8:15:31 AM

I must agree.


[EDITOR] Better variable names on 5/28/2015 10:20:20 AM

It's no use having extra posts here that have to accepted or rejected. It's better to have one post. Necroing is fine in this forum.


How long is does it take to make a 5/8 storygame? on 4/15/2015 4:20:26 AM

Yeah, but still, most of it was written then.