Player Comments on The Cupcake Games

-_- This just annoyed me.

Sorry but this was not really that good at all. Extremely short and lots of bad grammar. I would proofread it and add a lot more storyline and choices.

The story was very incredibly short, and I noticed a few minor spelling errors along with missing commas and not capitalised words. It took me literally two choices to win, and the story made little sense in my opinion.

Every "death" ending makes you loop back to the beginning of the game. Fortunately, the game is short. There's no logic in which choices lead you to the ending, the writing is substandard, and it has very little to do with either Hunger Games or Soul Eater.

it would have been better if it was longer, perhaps better descriptions of characters and such....

Short and boring. Also very confusing.

I'm just going to back away now...

Seriously, I did not know what the choices meant. The story itself was short and disconnected. You missed key points of any sort of hungergames, many choices were made without out choice and many random events could kill you. There was no way to know which choice would not lead to death. I am a big fan of the hunger games trilogy and I see a lot of potential in this storygame. Just make it longer and interact more with the viewer!

I trusted you! I thought it was going to be a good game because it had a prologue and the first page was long! Yet you lied to me...it was a mere 5 pages long at most. I was enjoying it until I suddenly died.