Player Comments on The Sojourner's Home

Enjoyable!

This story is well written and I enjoyed the humorous approach that the main character has with his world. I thought the characters were pretty well developed and were fun to explore the world with.

Seemed a little short and many of the endings a little sudden (most likely due to hitting the contest deadline). But I enjoyed the writing and wish it was longer to allow for more time to experience this world.

Overall a great job. Thanks Petros.

I found it to be a fun, humorous piece with lively characters, funny quips, and diverse branching. Petros does a great job establishing a solid backstory and worldbuilding without infodumping.

There are signs of it being rushed for the contest (occasional grammatical errors, abrupt gruesome deaths, etc), but those are things that can be revised and improved.

Very enjoyable read overall. Plenty of room to expand upon. Nice job!

The choices you can make as a morally-bankrupt slaver are pretty hilarious sometimes. Initially, I thought it was off-putting how ruthless the protagonist could be, but I got used to it pretty quickly. The story branches and endings are well-varied and I like the wackiness of the planets.

It’s a bit short, but it’s a fun ride!

Great story! Definitely a strong contender for this year's contest!