Player Comments on The Song Binder

A good read with decent writing and a quite immersive world that ended a little suddenly. A good read overall.

Enjoyable read and well written story. The world felt big and immersive and I Wish there was more of it to explore.

Nice work!

I Enjoyed this story but it could have been longer.

The writing is very excellent and vivid. The story is meaningful and packed of exposition. The characters are interesting. It could definitely could become an epic with more time and writing. Besides the classic goblin-under-the-bridge-telling-riddles, I feel like this story is more high fantasy than fairytale, but I won’t hold it against it. And like a lot of high fantasy, this story suffers from key-smash character names which are difficult to remember as well as heavy exposition at the beginning, which would work so much better if the story was simply longer and elaborated.

I rather liked it, the ideas for the world (creatures, food, people) were imaginative and certainly have a good amount of potential, but it was sadly a little short. Also, I think that there was perhaps too much exposition at the start.