Player Comments on 24 Hours

Hip-hop! No matter how bad this is; keep laughing on this garbage!

Hard to tell where the game ends... I don't mind games like this, but I'm growing tired of them. Branch the paths out a little.

Did you even finish this game properly? Or where you looking for a free 10 points? I ask you.

not good in any way

I'm guessing the cure of the rabid squirrel is the winning end?

I didn't even bother to finish this one.

Can you even win?

Well, I didn't last for 24 hours because I called animal control about a squirell with rabies. Obviously this means I can't go out for the rest of the 24 hours? It was okay. I only give it a slightly more fun then homework because that rating should be the worst one.

Linear and for 24 hours, it was short. But still a great game.

Obvious effort on descriptions put in, so I rated this one higher than I otherwise would have. The writing has minor potential, but there are too many cliche's, and the story ends far too quickly. Try adding some more options and text. The original idea could be a good one. As is, however, this is pretty bad.

I'm sorry to say but you should spend some more time when making a game. I mean, it made me giggle a little but here are some things you can work on.

1. The First Page - OMG! That is the worst thing to use when making a game.

2. Links=Page Name - Now that's just lack of effort. You do know you can make a game's link and title page different?

3. It says I instead of you! It's not you who's playing. It's me. I'm reading it as if somebody else is telling the story. I don't need to tell myself," I walked down a street." Instead, use, "You walk down a street." It's so much better.

Next time try using those hints and I'll actually rate the game based on content.

This game is sooo cheesy.........

TOO many end games. You shoulda went on for longer

Ok im sorry but this game wouldent be able to breath if it was human.There is one slightly good ending. I even went through all of the possible endings and choices. How long did this game take you to make in real life? Really? Maybe about 5-10 minutes. Also in real life, this wouldent be 24 hours. It would be more like 10 minutes. All you have to do to get any ending is 3-6 choices and then your done! And if you got robbed of your money you wouldent be afraid of the outside world!Im sorry but only a 1/100 rating.

There was notning really wrong with that, it just wasn't that fun. Sorry...

None of the endings were good. And why is this call 24 hours? Is it like, what happened in one day? Well, anyway, your spelling needs a little working on, and a bit longer if you want to have a decent game.

Okay, this game was not very good at all. As nate noted, this story does not take place within the span of 24 hours. It needs to be much longer. The plot needs to be more developed with a definate goal for the main character (the reader)to reach. Don't write your next story from the first person, as it is akward to read. And lastly, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE learn to spell! The spelling was really bad and was distracting from the story.

sorry man, but this game was just not that good. there was no plot, there was no real story, there wasnt even more than 30 minutes in a real life experience in here. the story needs revamping. if its called 24 hours, make it atleast an hour of time.