Player Comments on A Mystical Adventure

This would have been good if it were finished. Unfortunately, half of the links still need to be finished. Not bad but not good, either. 4/8

— RiterOfWrandom on 7/4/2011 8:53:41 PM with a score of 0

Pretty good, is this for the fantasy contest? Anyways, here's a few suggestions?
1. Proofreading
2. Unrealistic options. I can't refuse to take the wine? Why not tell the mayor where the wine came from first? Why can't I ask the mystical man about my amnesia? Hell that'd be the first thing I'd be doing everywhere I went.
3. Pictures
Would like to read more of this story.

— urnam0 on 7/3/2011 7:06:55 PM with a score of 0

pretty good

— ThisisBo on 7/3/2011 4:28:35 PM with a score of 0

I thought it was a great story, too bad it isn't finished ;)

— Romulus on 7/3/2011 6:44:08 AM with a score of 0