Player Comments on A Tale of Farms and Fairs

good

Every fair I go to I always make sure to stop and eat funnel cake. I’m glad to see someone who enjoys them as much as I do.

Pretty decent game in all. Vaugely informative about chicken breeds and such.

I would have liked to see some more variation in the different paths, they all followed the same formula of get animal, name and take care of animal, go to competition, and an idealized epilogue.

You could have done this same thing with far less words and copy pasting with just a bit of basic coding. I found an article explaining it for you because I enjoy wasting my time. https://chooseyourstory.com/help/articles/article.aspx?ArticleId=3850

There was a broken link for the epilogue of Hugo the pig as well.

This is a very short game where not much happens, however I would like to see a much larger and more expanded version in the future. So take the basic idea and stretch it out a LOT more; adding more characters and a story would be a great idea, though even adding a few longer descriptions would help loads. I'm a strong believer in games which don't have to have a lot, or even any, major instances of conflict and where the player can just exist and explore, but they still have to have a great deal more immersion to make up for the lack of story.

I would advise anyone interested,especially the author, to try reading/watching stories like "Charlotte's Web" or "Babe/The Sheep Pig", something along those lines would be an absolutely great addition and something I would happily rate higher.