Player Comments on Aokigahara Forest

Not bad for someone's first story. I like the way you presented it, and also adding additional facts about the forest. It made me want to go just to take a look. Maybe I can look more into it online.
I heard a Youtuber from Ohio wearing an alien hat from toy story, went there, hopefully he did nothing bad.

It's really not bad, especially considering the author joined the site three days ago. Keep at it!

I'm not great with advice and didn't nitpick for this one, but it's good for your first story. I like that there's a lot of choices for the reader because this is a choose your story, although I think the text on each page is a bit short.

I hope you find this useful :D