Atoms are atoms, and science doesn't matter really, that's your perspective. Until you get mysteriously transported to a world where science is everything...

This is my EndMaster's edutainment contest entry. Please leave constructive criticism, I want to get better.

Also, the score doesn't really mean anything. If someone has a higher score, it's not that they did better because I was using it as a kind of toggle thing so that certain options would only come up when you did whatever was needed.

     I am also aware it isn't too good at the educational part, that's my bad. I chose to try chemistry, and well... I'm not a chemist. I also talked a bit about energy in here because I know more about it, if you stay alive long enough and keep reading.

     So... um... I expected to have a lot more time... oh well maybe SHAME is deserved in this case... my strategy is to do one branch at a time, because when I don't I get info from different branches mixed up, and so only one branch has changed at all since I unpublished it and I didn't even finish that... well I did write up endings to try and wrap it up... and there are a few options that are more similar than I'd like them to be because of shortage of time...

     Also the incomplete explanations for characters like the man and the jester mask and unknowns for some other things aren't just rushed endings, I like to leave some things unexplained so I can build onto it in the future if I want to. I may not though. Sorry if someone has a problem with this. Same thing for the barrier, that's explained more if I make another story, I already have the stuff in my head just not on paper (or... screen?).

      Well in any case, I still hope you enjoy my story and have a good day! :D

     You live in a community where everyone has magic. It's your coming of age and you're so exited... but you don't get magic. You're looked down upon and ridiculed. Then later your village is attacked and a miracle happens...

     The Armed With Wings image at the beginning was drawn by me, although I edited it so you could see the color better because it was a bit faded looking.

     Ignore the sentences at the top, they're not part of the story game. They're there for me to know the timeline. Most or all of my stories are going to be in one massive multiverse, so I use it to know when it is in comparison to other stories as to not have my stories collide or if they do I know it. If you want to know how it works, the gen is short for generation which is for generation of characters which will be a large amount of time, the second thing is the most important event that's happening in any of my stories at that time or is closest to that time and the others are dates and times and the abbreviations are for what time system it is (usually not from earth).

     You're in a lab, and your head seems foggy. You can't remember anything and can't seem to think straight. You have to get out and learn what the heck is happening.

     This is my 2nd story game, and probably better than the first one. This was made based off a story I've already written called Demon Doll, but with some changes and shorter. Sorry if some variables or something isn't working right, I'm still figuring out how to use everything.

     The cover image (the doll) was drawn by me.

     Thank you RKralloner and my sister (Bloo on this site) for inspiration, and goodnight for proofreading. :)

     Ignore the sentences at the top, they're not part of the story game. They're there for me to know the timeline. Most or all of my stories are going to be in one massive multiverse, so I use it to know when it is in comparison to other stories as to not have my stories collide or if they do I know it. If you want to know how it works, the gen is short for generation which is for generation of characters which will be a large amount of time, the second thing is the most important event that's happening in any of my stories at that time or is closest to that time and the others are dates and times and the abbreviations are for what time system it is (usually not from earth).

     Out of 2000 people, YOU have been chosen! yes you, user. if you can manage to beat the games, you win enough money to keep you rich for the rest of your life. but if you don't, well... best write a will.

This is not a story game, it's for me incase I forget something important.

This is a collection of very short storys, it's mostly me trying to incorporate pictures into a story. Not drawings, but edited pics.

There are 9 ducks, 2 purple, 2 pink, 3 blue, and 2 yellow. This is going to start as the story of the extra blue duck discovering the world my story takes place in and joining the other ducks, and I'll unpublish it to add more mini stories when I have the time.

      This is a pet project. The bolded version is the current one. I doubt I'll switch back to an old one, though. This is also my way of procrastinating as well as having something published that's not too bad and didn't take long to make that I can come back to when bored.

• Version 1.0: 1 basic story, 1 advanced story with 2 choices. Hasn't been proofread by anyone besides me.

     For version 2 I'm probably going to add a second choice to the only advanced story and a third option to the first choice. Maybe another story or 2. I don't want to put too much into this before knowing it's supported, if it's a good idea. So please, should I continue this or scap it before it's taken too much effort?

Testing game features, THIS IS NOT A STORYGAME

     There's giant holes that appeared in 2025, they drop to The Grid. A series of 5 meter by 5 meter by 5 meter cubes that are connected by some sort of tube, in a, you guessed it, a grid pattern. Up and down, left and right. No one who's gone into The Grid, has ever come out.
     Well, you just made a fantastic decision and decided to go in. Bye!

Please notify me of any flaws, and I'm up for constructive criticism. My story Testing 123 (unpublished, and will stay that way for eternity) is my sandbox for playing with site features and figuring out how they work, and this is my first time using any of these things so please tell me if the username, randomizing system, inventory, or anything else isn't working properly.

     The broken had horrific things done to them by that evil Dr. Jack, and he was going to do it to you... but you got out. He didn't break you, you and your community are the Unbroken. (You're a girl, in this story)

     There is an instance on the first page where the main character is listening to a voice mail from a detective, I don't actually know how a real detective would go around contacting a possible source but I did the best I can. Just be aware it's not entirely realistic, not just there.

     Also names like 123 random street aren't a lack of creativity, I put those in there because I thought it was funny and I've seen names like that used before. And a lack of creativity.

     My third story (not including my thunderdome stories) that I have written. Dr. Jack is inspired by Dr. Wondertainment from the SCP foundation.

     You're a average teenage girl called Kine, if you can be called average when you're one of the two best players of all time of the game BATTLEGROUNDS. But one day you get sucked into the game you spent most of your days playing...

     Thanks! :D Not sure I never procrastinate though...

Oh. Abuse?

     So, I was wondering what if we could PM with multiple people in one conversation? This is assuming of course that it's better as PMs rather than in the forums. It'd be so much easier than the weird webs you get when trying to connect multiple people with PMs.

     Also sorry if my forum presence is too much ><

¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Either that, or master the art of writing long stories incredibly fast. Or both, and write stories of middle length!

I did? I don't think I did and if I did I didn't mean to.

EDIT: oh wait I looked at it and remember now, if you read my review you'll see towards the end I was removing one point from my score every error I found, and these were sort of big mistakes, and I found enough that it dropped to one.

I just thought it was a big deal it had these mistakes because what if a 4th-6th grader was actually trying to learn from this?

Wow, I didn't get last place! :D

Cool, hi! Welcome to the site :D

I hope you're here to stay, read, and write. I highly recommend reading this article as it's quite helpful. If you're not a pain and have thick skin, the people here are pretty nice. :)

I don't really check the published dates. Also, I've been trying to read Constellaris Court.

oops! :P

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