Player Comments on Apocalypse survival
Ugh, I thought the torment would never end!
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ISentinelPenguinI
on 2/11/2015 2:26:59 PM with a score of 0
take it down grammar was bad and there are a lot of missing links 50 of the endings are THIS IS A NEW PAGE and have no links. Please tell me it is a demo because there are so many unfinished links.
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hayesa
on 2/10/2015 8:47:18 PM with a score of 0
......Huh? o.0
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InteractiveMaker
on 2/10/2015 5:20:44 PM with a score of 0
While there are lots of pages and admittedly quite a few endings, your grammar and spelling is painful. A cliche story idea with few original concepts. A lot of broken or unfinished links, too many to count. This is not the best.
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insanebutvain
on 2/10/2015 5:14:53 PM with a score of 0
Just bad grammar, more of a story and it wouldn't be as bad as it is.
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iqqih
on 2/10/2015 9:21:20 AM with a score of 0
Your grammar and capitalization could use some work. As for the "Over 100 endings!" boasted in the story description, I think I found 'em all, but broken links aren't considered an ending.
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ThePirateCaptain
on 2/10/2015 8:25:56 AM with a score of 0
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