Player Comments on Dr.Seven's Experiments

So please explain to me how I'm picking items up if I'm bound in a straightjacket?

I like the core idea of this game, as it's essentially a locked room puzzle (although you have more rooms to explore.) Add a mad scientist running experiments on you, and it's an even better plot.

Unfortunately, there are a lot of mixed tenses, grammar errors, typos, and other readability problems. The choices give the illusion of something to solve, but are really just guessing. Because of this, it isn't very pleasant to read or play.

If the readability was better and at least some choices were more puzzle-based than guess and explore based, this storygame would be a lot more interesting and fun.

I forgot to mention, there were a TON of mixed tenses. Also, the title has a mistake. It should be Dr. Seven's experiments.

3/8

The story was pretty short, then again I can really say all that much because my stories were arguably worse. I did notice a ton of spelling and grammar mistakes, including failing to do basic capitalization. The maturity level is way too high, it should be a 4, in my opinion. Also, the difficulty is too high as well. it should be something more like a 5.

Also, I'm pretty sure that this is not a horror game, so please remove that tag.