Player Comments on Escape From Josean

Fucking brilliant. The likes of Tolkein, Poe,and Ace would be fucking shamed by this story.

Interesting choice on avoiding dialogue, characterization, and coherency.

Bold choice on making the main character of an edutainment game about a historical period in Korea a mage. Also a bold creative choice in teaching me nothing about anything.

Not that there’s any point in actually critiquing this, but when did the protagonist rig up a tripwire and hide a banner in the room he was sneaking into?

It may be advisable to brush up on your language skills before your next story. One of the best ways to do that is through reading!! Brown Bear, Brown Bear, What do you See? is an excellent book in your reading level.