corgi213, The Dramatist

Member Since

4/25/2015

Last Activity

3/6/2021 2:56 PM

EXP Points

877

Post Count

1041

Storygame Count

2

Duel Stats

25 wins / 22 losses

Order

Marauder

Commendations

38

Quotes

"And if you want to write some very strange porn involving Steve, go ahead, I'm not gonna judge ... you weirdo." - Mayana

"God dammit, Corgi." - Steve

"The only problem with Corgi's story was the lack of branching for the most part.
Didn't mind it in general"
-EndMaster

"You idiot, you moron, you complete imbecile"- Mizal

 

"The name is not only all lowercase but includes numbers as well. A double whammy of ingenuity among usernames. The entire thing is full of awesome quotes aligned with a cool sidebar, where five years are shown to have gone by with an impressive number of points and posts to show for it. I'm sure the story games show a user with tons of time and dedication to the site.


8/8."-Your number one fan.

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Storygames

The Last Chieftain

The land of Orcin, a place where all are free to live as they wish as long as they follow the laws of the council.  Years of relative peace had ensued, making sure the orcs would live as strong and as free as they had always been.

The Mannate Empire, destined to consume everything on the horizon, sets its sights on the homeland of the orcs.  Annexing one kingdom, one empire after the next, finally looks to orcin for resources, troops, and land to settle, as they prepare their dreaded march.

Nolazir, a simple orc, who lives off the land as he works his farm, unknowingly would be drawn into events to come.  He would come to shape the world around him, and the future of Orcin.  

Fight for honor, love, peace, and prosperity.  Lead with a cruel fist, or a warm heart.  Challenges and tribulations lay ahead for all. 

Will you save your homeland and return it from the brink?  Will you let the darkness within and without consume you?  What becomes of you and the world, is up to you.

The next edition will come out in a few months, filled with more varied events between time jumps including, politics, monsters, and more!  Also will be adding the rest of the real story and the side branches in as well.

Special Thanks

Where to begin exactly?  I'll start off with thanking Mizal, who helped me with some proof reading and structure at the start, and helping me figure out how to use variables.  Also for always being willing to help with my writing, grammar, and developing characters all these years, and generally being a wonderful presence on this site :)

I would like to thank MoreCowbell for consistently proofreading and giving me feedback on my story throughout this long process.  I appreciate all of your spell checking, helping keep the flow and pace, and general positivity and motivation during this whole project. 

I would like to thank 3iguy for taking an interest in my story and beta reading it for me.  As well as Ebon for his detailed and insightful responses to some of my threads early on.

I'd also like to thank Ogre, IAP for encouraging me and keeping me motivated during the hardest parts of the process (mostly the end point).

Also would like to thank EndMaster for letting me rip off his organization scheme for storygames.

I really couldn't have done this without you guys, and I owe a great part of finally finishing this to all of you and to CYS as a general whole.

I hope you all enjoy!


The Pie

One guy on a quest...for magic crytals!  Unfortunately this is the land of Cystia...and things almost never happen as expected.  

What starts as a normal day turns into a mad quest for revenge, live the life of a dude turned into an evil....killer pie!

Will you find redemption?  Or will you truly be evil? No one cares!  


Arren Gul
unpublished

For End Master's Dark Fantasy Contest


Asylum of Hunters
unpublished

The blood of men runs cold, the hour of the beast is nigh upon us.

Under starlight, the forsworn prepare for their ancient duty.

For the Pale Flame shimmers low, and the sanctity of the human mind must be shed.
 


Attack of the Savoids
unpublished

Darth Vader
unpublished

Vader must face the hell that is the space DMV.


Doppenton
unpublished

Feel the suns warmth.

Breath that fresh air!

You are happy.

Your life is nice and cozy, it's a dream come true!

One day, you meet your own doppleganger.

What you do from here is up to you.

 


Dream Walker
unpublished

Forge
unpublished

In the wild, beastly lands of Velis Brum, many are prey to the whims and cruelty of men and monster alike.

A small village resides in the caves Manchor Vanit, it is here you have been born. Taught to remain close to the caves all of your life, you never caught a glimpse of what was beyond the mountains, and when you did it was often cruel and unsettling.

Your mostly quiet existence would end when Baglich would come to take your homeland, with their scum and barbarian fiends.

Gather family, allies, old foes, and create an empire suitable to standing up to this terror of the land.


Guide Us, Flames
unpublished

Hunter's Bounty
unpublished

Invidia
unpublished

A dispute, a broken promise.  The envy of one will break a kingdom.  

The half man, half dragon sorcerer Tarragon threatens your king, your home, your very way of life.  

How far will you go to make sure justice is brought to this foul madman?

Chose between to very different characters to embark on this epic quest, slay the dragon, save the princess, and restore honor to your kingdom.


Life as a Piece of Bread
unpublished


Necronanny
unpublished

Evil Grannies Galore!


Quarry
unpublished

Come, rest your weary feet. 
Sit by the campfire, warm those hands.  You must be tired.  
Oh, you like stories do you?
Hmm, here's a story for you.  One that goes way back, to a time when the night ruled, and the howling of beasts would make any man tremble.  Relax, it's going to be a long one.


Salvation
unpublished


Scourge
unpublished

An orc named Tumble, young, wild, and free.  

Life is great in a village nestled in between the mountains, the birth place of the great Orc race.  But for the past century a series of brutal crusades have left them divided and broken.

The Mannate Empire threatens to swallow them whole, just as it has done with everyone else in its path.  But then one day an even bigger threat to the land rises out of the fires of fate, undeterred by the ravages of time. 

They call him Scourge.  His forces threaten the very land, and all of life as it stands now.  

Will Tumble play the role fate has dealt him and stop the evil Scourge?

Or will he abandon the world before him and find his own way?


Silent Spire
unpublished

For End Masters Dark Fantasy Contest.

In the land of Arren Gul, a Spire sits, its true nature hidden from those who would draw its power.

A man in the guise of a restless spirit ventures toward it to bring his enemies to justice.


The Silver Ghost
unpublished

Vigilant
unpublished


Yet Another Freaking Wolf Story
unpublished

Zombpocalypse
unpublished

An exercise in seeing how fast I can crank one of these out.


Recent Posts

Ace is dead on 2/25/2021 10:14:22 PM

You writing anything cool?


Ace is dead on 2/25/2021 10:12:53 PM

Given the ops joke "I could never outrun my past" is a poor choice of words


Story idea on 2/25/2021 8:25:13 PM

This sounds like it would be a real fucking blast and Im excited to see how it turns out.


For when CoG isn't faggy enough! on 2/18/2021 2:20:21 PM

This thread was a blast

You're all awesome


Edgelord 2 Contest Results on 2/3/2021 11:04:45 AM

5 rating is good enough for me.

Thanks for reading it  

 


EndMaster’s Edgelord Contest 2: Grimdark Boogaloo on 1/31/2021 10:45:11 PM

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/silent-spire

My story for the contest


Is this fanfic? on 1/13/2021 1:09:51 AM

Lol

Dont forget they must be lead by their untrustworthy acquaintance, Seagull.


Take two and call me in the morning on 1/2/2021 4:24:50 PM

He must have mistaken this for another site.


Gift of the Phoenix on 12/15/2020 6:08:47 PM

Well, what I meant is that it can be serious but have a more upbeat tone. You'll finish one at some point.

You should just submit two entries

Or 30 entries even


Gift of the Phoenix on 12/15/2020 5:46:03 PM

Mizals response to Northwind confirms what I had suspected.

That the royal family have a lot of enemies (probably within their kingdom too) which is why the princess leaving is such a big deal.

I'm sort of wondering if the big deal about the princesses magic capabilities having something to do with the kingdoms defense is supposed to be like how in actual medieval times a lot of nobles received various combat training. Except the twist in this case is the same scenario but with magic instead, and only wealthy and powerful people have access to it.

 

That's what Im assuming anyways. 

It all makes sense why the royal family would need to be so cold and ruthless as it literally means survival.

I'm liking how this story gives us stuff to think about and speculate on. I feel most of Mizals writing tends to be more light hearted and with brighter toned stories (Inseparable aside that I can remember.)

But it seems like she has a knack for writing grim stuff too which is really cool.