The Song Binder

A fantasy storygame by corgi213

Player Rating4.84/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 17 ratings since 09/08/2023
Played 147 times (finished 19)

Story Difficulty2/8

"Walk in the park"

Play Length3/8

"A nice jog down the driveway"

Maturity Level4/8

"Need to be accompanied by an adult"

Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

Tags

Contest Entry

Family Friendly

Fantasy

Multiple Protagonists

For MHD's Fairy Tale Contest

A great evil long thought vanquished stirs again. A great horn calls, and The Wall of Harmony falls. A great council is called where a group of heroes must band together to stop this evil. From the land of the strange Elichen to the Stone Mark, where the dark lord lives, enter the Other World, bind their song, and cast the great evil forever from this world and the next.

Izlaroth

Player Comments

A good read with decent writing and a quite immersive world that ended a little suddenly. A good read overall.

— Will11 on 1/23/2024 8:59:42 PM with a score of 0

Enjoyable read and well written story. The world felt big and immersive and I Wish there was more of it to explore.

Nice work!

— DBNB on 9/22/2023 3:48:45 PM with a score of 0

I Enjoyed this story but it could have been longer.

— Lilac on 9/20/2023 11:26:50 AM with a score of 0

The writing is very excellent and vivid. The story is meaningful and packed of exposition. The characters are interesting. It could definitely could become an epic with more time and writing. Besides the classic goblin-under-the-bridge-telling-riddles, I feel like this story is more high fantasy than fairytale, but I won’t hold it against it. And like a lot of high fantasy, this story suffers from key-smash character names which are difficult to remember as well as heavy exposition at the beginning, which would work so much better if the story was simply longer and elaborated.

— MadHattersDaughter on 9/14/2023 8:41:21 PM with a score of 0

I rather liked it, the ideas for the world (creatures, food, people) were imaginative and certainly have a good amount of potential, but it was sadly a little short. Also, I think that there was perhaps too much exposition at the start.

— fluttershypegasus on 9/8/2023 7:16:05 PM with a score of 0

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