Mystic_Warrior, The Master Scrivener

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6/10/2019

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11/29/2024 5:04 AM

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6

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Hi there! I'm Mystic Warrior, a writer of many words, as evidenced by my storygames, reviews and often unsolicited writing advice. Feel free to browse my collection of works below.

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Here are some storygames you should read (based on my totally not biased opinion): 
 

For those of you who are in the midst of playing A Hunted and Haunted Halloween, here's a walkthrough.

Trophies Earned

Earning 100 Points Earning 500 Points Earning 1,000 Points Earning 2,000 Points Welcome to the Jungle, 2020. We all know it should've been you. -- M Having 4 Storygame(s) Featured Given by BerkaZerka on 10/17/2021 - Bout time! Given by EndMaster on 07/10/2022 - For your all your contributions to the site Given by Killa_Robot on 09/28/2022 - For somehow managing to be a good person AND writer at the same time. Given by MadHattersDaughter on 01/13/2022 - For your consistently fantastic stories and positive attitude. Looking forward to seeing what you continue to create! Given by mizal on 01/03/2022 - Incredible writing output and a wholesome personality. Your presence is a pure positive for the site. Given by ninjapitka on 03/17/2023 - Your efforts don't go unnoticed...or unappreciated. Given by Will11 on 10/11/2024 - For winning the 2024 Reading Competition and for all your great contributions to the site!

Storygames

Featured Story A Hunted and Haunted Halloween

For End Master's Manifest Destiny Contest.

"Welcome to the experiment. A man is dead, and you have to find his killer. There will be a list of rules in your room once this briefing is over, but all you really need to know is this: There are five of you, but only one can solve the mystery. You will be given five days. Each night, one of you will die - no more, no less.

Ready? Even if you're not, it doesn't matter. You're in my world now."
 

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This is also a War on Intfiction contribution.

Note: Aside from a few references to Dreamtruder characters/ events, this storygame is a standalone.

It is my first time writing a mystery storygame on this site, so I would appreciate if you could leave feedback on whether this mystery was too easy/ difficult to solve. If you find yourself stuck, don't hesitate to message me directly. That being said, do not feel discouraged if you are bewildered at first; as you progress further in the game, the clues and secrets would make everything clearer. Eventually, the secrets you find would allow you to make sense of most clues except a few, and these would point to the killer.

Make use of the notebook, which would keep track of the information you gained from the interviews and the secrets you may find out. Also, check the item descriptions of all the objects since some of these would have to be 'used' in order to access some clues.

Once you've solved the mystery, there are 3 possible endings you could get. Only one of these actually results in returning back to the 'real world'. If you're looking for this 'true ending', it requires you to play through the last of the five days rather than just skipping to the end and guessing the answer.

Good luck surviving the Halloween experiment!


Featured Story Breaker

Beneath the seas, hidden from the Ones Above, our society goes about our normal, routinely lives. I cannot help but feel bored with all that is going on, until I find the letter. A letter that sends me on a journey to deliver a magical item to the group of people that have been villainized over the years, the letter that challenges everything I thought I knew. But which side is on the side of good? How can I break out of the only world I have ever known? Should I join the heroic villains or the villainous hero? I have finally gotten the adventure I always needed, but not exactly the one I wanted.

(Edit - note from the author: I'll be going through the process of fixing any bugs/ problems in this storygame soon, like the inescapable loops, so apologies for those who encounter these or any other issues caused by the upcoming changes).

Breaker

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Note: This game was created for Camelon's break contest. During the part where a specialist is assigned to the breakers, there are three different paths (Lawbreaker, Breaker of People and Breaker and Enterer). Due to time constraints, for those who would like to know, Breaker of People is the longest path, followed by Lawbreaker and Breaker and Enterer, but aside from the epilogues, it all leads to the same chapter 5. As before, feel free to comment or message me if you encounter any issues or problems that I should fix.


Dreamtruder

"The delicate balance between the dream world and the real world is disrupted. You intruded and messed up the dream of an innocent. By talking about this with an Unknowing, the possibility of the dreamstage being unveiled is now greater than ever. The Jury has made a decision - we have no choice but to send you to The Jungle..."

Dreamtruder

 

 

Life was hard, balancing work and relaxation. Then the nightmares came, and all I ever wanted was to be free of them. Yet, I never accounted for this - finding out the truth about the dream world, exploring the vast plane of the imagination...only to be whisked away to the longest nightmare ever. 

Think a jungle's bad? Try a fictional jungle, where literally anything can happen, and the most creative minds have conspired to give you a hard time.

 

 

 

Note: This game was created for Mizal's 'Welcome to the Jungle' contest. There are several epilogues, and while the main one is the normal Dreamtruder path, others include Dream director, Dreamcaster, Dreamediator, and Dreamhero. Fancy a challenge? Try completing the Jungle challenge without picking up any dreampowers - it's possible, but requires a bit of thinking and planning ahead. Also, for some items, click the 'use' button as a link would not be provided (if this is the case, it would be specified in the object description)

Since this would be my first published storygame, I am still relatively new to this. Feel free to message me or spam the comments if you encounter any issues, have any suggestions for improvement, or just have something you want to say.

Enjoy!


Fall to Hopelessness

A quest doomed from the start. A man with an unwavering yet unusual moral compass. A daughter in the darkest depths of the night sky.

It isn't truly over until all hope is lost.

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'Good and evil, heroes and villains… they are all fantasies created by the world. There are only two types of people: the people you care about, and the people you don’t.'

Arnold Cyzila's best life may have been long since over, but he would do anything to save his daughter from the clutches of her confinement. Even stealing an airplane, killing the innocent, and entering a dangerous world where death is almost guaranteed. 

[Warning: There are some mentions of murder, deaths and several dark themes, so if those things make you uncomfortable, perhaps it is better not to read this story.]

Note: I initially did not plan on joining this contest, yet I'm glad I did since it has motivated me to publish a new storygame. It is related to Dreamtruder in a way… well, you’ll see. While this story may not be as long as my previous two, it was interesting to write a shorter project. 

Just like all my other storygames, commenting and rating this story are both highly welcomed and appreciated. Also, as I have used quite a lot of variables in several fight scenes, let me know if you ever encounter a page where there are no visible links. 

Lastly, there are a few different epilogues but the 'main' one would be an epilogue which mirrors the start of the story (you'll know it when you see it). There are three possible ways to reach that. Even though I may consider it to be the true ending, it is not a typical happy ending.


Featured Story In Moonlit Waters

For EndMaster's Prompt Contest

Prompt: A story involving an old Oriental style setting
 

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A simple quest for revenge turns into a deadly competition.


The Shi Empires, governed by the Ten Emperors, appear to be undefeatable. But Liu Longyi's desire to avenge Mother tranports her to four deadly battles, marked by the sudden appearance of a chaos deity.

As she battles competitors for the throne, Liu Longyi learns the truth about the mighty Shi Empires, along with the most closely guarded secret of Yue Palace. 

Author's Notes:

1. This story makes use of delayed consequences, so replaying would grant different outcomes, even if they aren't always visible at first.
2. There are some instances of violent and slightly mature content, so reader's discretion is advised.
3. If you prefer to read the storygame in the same browser, you could click the title page instead of the 'play' button.

Hope you enjoy the storygame!


Featured Story Spell of Slumber

For EndMaster's Prompt Contest 2

Prompt: A story involving fairies in some way


 

"Save your breath. We both know how this story ends."

 


As a spellsinger from an illustrious family, Aubrynne Spelwinter has always sought greatness. Yet, in an attempt to shatter a notorious curse, she becomes one of its casters.

In seven days, the curse will take effect. However, Aubrynne's mission leads to an unlikely alliance with the Cursed King, with whom she races against the clock to save her kingdom from conquests and faceless enemies.

Author's notes: 

1. There are 5 epilogues and it'll be obvious which the 'main' one is. 
2. This is a retelling of a classic fairytale, Sleeping Beauty, although aside from a few plot points, it features unique characters, settings, and narratives.
3. If you prefer to read the storygame in the same browser, you could click the title page instead of the 'play' button.

Hope you enjoy the storygame!

Link to video trailer: https://imgur.com/9T3UWTW

 

 


Dear fellow Earthians and Utopians #05
unpublished

If you don't like letters, extremely short stories or cliched moral lessons, don't read this. I found it when I was browsing through the old storygames I had created a long time ago. If I'm not mistaken, this was made for Mizal's Tiny 'Topias jam although I never really thought it was good enough to add to the thread. I don't think I'll publish this, but it's completed if anyone happens to browse my profile and wants to read it.


Walkthrough: A Hunted and Haunted Halloween
unpublished

On a dark and chilly night, you visit the Skeleton to ask for hints in order to solve the mystery of 'A Hunted and Haunted Halloween'.

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If you find yourself stuck while trying to complete A Hunted and Haunted Halloween, this is the guide for you! Since it is a walkthrough, there are bound to be spoilers, so I recommend reading the storygame before referring to this.

Do let me know if you find any inconsistencies between the storygame and this walkthrough. As this would remain unpublished, I should be able to fix errors rather quickly.

That's all from me. Enjoy!


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Recent Posts

Avery Actually Writes Something For Once! on 11/13/2024 3:59:31 AM

Thank you


Avery Actually Writes Something For Once! on 11/13/2024 3:48:50 AM

Getting sick is the worst, especially when you're working towards an ambitious goal. Hope you get well soon.


Applying heat to food on 11/13/2024 3:48:41 AM

Post the results when you do. 


Avery Actually Writes Something For Once! on 11/13/2024 3:48:25 AM

Looks like they have a shop in a nearby town. If I get through all my readings this week without burning out, I'll pop by and maybe get something there. 


Avery Actually Writes Something For Once! on 11/13/2024 3:48:02 AM

Oops, missed this question. It was my birthday last month. TCat photoshopped a birthday version of my pfp, though it's now December and I forgot to change it back. 


Can you boil rice? on 11/10/2024 10:05:07 AM

For me, the appliance I didn't know how to use when I started cooking was a microwave. I never had it back home so I thought it would function like an oven. Long story short, I made a microwave meal for the first time, removed the plastic covering, and when I returned, the whole microwave was filled with sauce lol. 


Psycho killer! Qu'est-ce que c'est? on 11/10/2024 9:55:26 AM

The others have already given advice about the character himself, so I'll just write a bit about portraying him in relation to other characters.

To make him appear unhinged, he has to seem that way especially in comparison to other characters. For instance, in a grimdark world where murder is the norm, no one would bat an eye at a murderer. Yet if it's a civilized society where even littering is seen as a grave crime, then shoving someone else into a thorn bush would appear psycopathic. Essentially, first establish what 'normal behaviour' is in your setting, then show how he deviates from this norm.

Another important thing is to consider the voice of your narrator. Usually, stories are written from the perspective of the protagonist, so the way the protagonist perceives this character influences the reader's own perception. It might have to do with them having contrasting morals, e.g. character foils. You can change the way that this antagonist is viewed based on how the protagonist reacts to his actions.

The tone of the story influences a lot too, as depending on whether you frame his murders as severe or humorous, the reader's perception of this character shifts. Pacing plays a role as well - for a more impactful murder, take time to characterize the details surrounding it, such as the backstory of the victim and how gruesome the method of murder was. 


Avery Actually Writes Something For Once! on 11/10/2024 9:42:09 AM

Rewarding yourself for reaching your milestones is a fun technique, I remember giving myself a milkshake at the halfway mark of my last storygame and a ring with a little crown at the end. That chocolate looks good too. I might have to try to hunt for it in my nearby shops. 


Avery Actually Writes Something For Once! on 11/10/2024 9:40:32 AM

I know it's a bit of a belated congratulations now, but I'll give you a virtual standing ovation! Setting a new personal record is always a great feeling. 


Can you boil rice? on 11/10/2024 9:20:46 AM

I'll rate my cooking abilities about 4 - 5 (the average). I can make basic meals and managed to cook for a society without poisoning anyone. For anything slightly complex, I tend to scrupulously follow recipes to the point where I'm setting timers and using exact measurements. That feels less like cooking and more like instruction-following. As for rice, I've never made it without a rice cooker so that might lower my score.