In Moonlit Waters

A fantasy storygame by Mystic_Warrior

Commended by EndMaster on 7/13/2022 9:31:40 AM

Player Rating7.15/8

"#96 overall, #3 for 2022"
Based on 58 ratings since 07/04/2022
Played 2,867 times (finished 72)

Story Difficulty3/8

"Trek through the forest"

Play Length7/8

"It keeps going and going"

Maturity Level6/8

"I'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably be between PG-13 and R.

For EndMaster's Prompt Contest

Prompt: A story involving an old Oriental style setting

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A simple quest for revenge turns into a deadly competition.

The Shi Empires, governed by the Ten Emperors, appear to be undefeatable. But Liu Longyi's desire to avenge Mother tranports her to four deadly battles, marked by the sudden appearance of a chaos deity.

As she battles competitors for the throne, Liu Longyi learns the truth about the mighty Shi Empires, along with the most closely guarded secret of Yue Palace. 

Author's Notes:

1. This story makes use of delayed consequences, so replaying would grant different outcomes, even if they aren't always visible at first.
2. There are some instances of violent and slightly mature content, so reader's discretion is advised.
3. If you prefer to read the storygame in the same browser, you could click the title page instead of the 'play' button.

Hope you enjoy the storygame!

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