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2/8/2026 8:01 PM

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2 wins / 0 losses

Infrangible Warden

A Treatise on Heartly Manners

A contest entry for Bucky's year's end contest: choose your own prompt II.
Play as Lord Robert, the baron of Rivellon, at the lowest point of his life. He's cheated on by his wife, betrayed by his liege and filled to the brim with a turmoil of conflicting emotions.
How does his life end? 

Avarga

Entry for EndMaster's Prompt Contest 3. In this epic tale of courage, sacrifice, and redemption, Your journey will take you to the very edge of existence and beyond. Will you stand to lead; or will your story be cut short?

Brimstone

Allow me to share my story.

Cannibal Apocalypse

Pretty sure this isn't meant for the family-friendly category.

AAA Nazi Game

unpublished

Yeah, that title's gonna change

An alternate history scenario after the victory of the Third Reich.

An entry to End Master's Prompt Contest 5: "A story about time traveling Nazis or dinner with Hitler. I don't care, just something with Nazis I guess. Time period and location still don't matter."

AvargB

unpublished

Contest Winner

unpublished

It did not win.

Darkest Hour

unpublished

The year is 2478 and the human race once again finds itself within Sol's borders. Like a phoenix from our bitter past, we have risen anew.

Like Aeneas, we had been cast out of our home. We searched the galaxy for a new home, and like him, we found it and made it our own. We struggled and were battered by the harsh conditions. But now, both ready and willing, we will eclipse the legends of old.

Now we shall fight to reclaim what is rightfully ours.

General Butt Naked

unpublished

FOR ENDMASTER'S CONTEST<, PRAISED BE THE LEGEND.

Liberia and Sierra Leone are small countries on the west coast of Africa. Like many African countries, the lands are extremely rich in natural resources and vibrant in culture.

However, in the 1980s the climate halted in corruption and mismanagement under the All People's Congress Party. With over 70% of the people barely capable of buying a single cup of rice, survival became much harder. Not trusting in the democratic process any longer, the RUF was formed to drastically revamp the economic system and redistribute the country's wealth. They fought for education, jobs, and true democracy. In the process, they pillaged the lands and cut off many limbs.

It is in these times Joshua Milton Blahyi is born, butt naked. And in these times he'll fight, butt naked. For he is:

General Butt Naked.

Neglected

unpublished

This is my neglected story.

zExpedition Aquarius

unpublished

For centuries, man has scoured the stars, desperate to find its likeness. Thus far all was for naught; empty husks and barren rocks worked hard to crush his dreams. There was just one anomaly, one beacon amid the darkness. This is its story. This is the story of man's first foray to the stars.

An entry to Mizal's Tiny 'topias Jam. Where a lot more little bite-sized stories are -and will be- shared by other authors.

And for those that don't have the extension, and thus can't click on the storygame to open it, here's a tiny backdoor left open. Feel free to make use of it, and even leave a comment if you like.

Expedition Aquarius

zLetters Unanswered

unpublished

An epistolary novel containing the desperate pleas of a sole father. How will he bring his daughter safety in a city ripe for rebellion?

An entry to Mizal's Tiny 'topias Jam. Where a lot more little bite-sized stories are -and will be- shared by other authors.

And for those that don't have the extension, and thus can't click on the storygame to open it, here's a tiny backdoor left open. Feel free to make use of it, and even leave a comment if you like.

Letters Unanswered

Chris

"And if you already posted something AI-touched, the credibility repair move is boring but effective: acknowledge it once, clearly, then stop debating it. Remove/replace the AI-touched parts with your own revision, or take it down and repost a fully-human version if that’s allowed." The funniest thing is that he had the correct way to go about things spelled out by his second leased brain right there in front of him, and instead did the polar opposite. That too is the human spirit.

I think there's a bit of a mismatch in expectations here. We're here on a hobbyist site about creative writing. Now to write a proper piece doesn't just take technical skill (though SPAG is the basis), it also celebrates the human spirit or 'creativity'. What makes it impressive is someone putting all that work and effort into something that is 100% genuinely authentically them. Conscious or subconscious, every little word on the page is something their brain picked out of endless different options. Some may be better writers than others, but everyone gives an earnest effort that's a true reflection of who they are and what they're capable of. And then you come along. You deny a 92.3% AI count on a mere gotcha minute nitpick of differing explanations. "No, your honor, I didn't let AI write it. I wrote it myself, then let AI turn my lazy writing into actual writing that every AI checker on the internet immediately picks up." Yeah no, dude. When the paragraphs read like AI slop, the AI checkers themselves saw it as AI slop, it is AI slop. And that's the thing. AI slop doesn't have that human spirit. Is it the weak amalgamation of the work of countless individuals reflected by something incapable of understanding any of it beyond the barest surface level mimicry. It literally doesn't have a soul to it. I don't come to this hobbyist site to read soulless slop, and if the notice on the forums didn't make the message abundantly clear, neither did most others. I come here for the community and the writers who actually give a damn, those who don't write for fame or commercial pursuits, but just because they want to show their creativity, their own human spirit. So no, don't go around acting huffy when you're caught red-handed. Eat cock and go fuck yourself, you dumb fucking retard.

Damn that's crazy

Damn, got no clue then

Suranna

Ogre

Damn that's crazy

If I was cooperative I'd repeat Mizal's words in that it is entirely too unclear as to what kind of input you're looking forward to exactly. There's nothing already written to critique. And at this point what you're describing is so wishy washy I can't offer any advice beyond something so broad as to not be anything meaningful at all, such as 'I like choices, duh' or 'just write well', or 'read Gower's Natalie game on the site if you want to see the narration address the reader directly in a fashion that actually works'. But I am not cooperative. We're rivals in this contest and it's a dog eat dog world out here.

I have faith