MrAce321, The Reader

Member Since

11/19/2020

Last Activity

12/5/2024 7:44 AM

EXP Points

8

Post Count

524

Storygame Count

2

Duel Stats

19 wins / 8 losses

Order

Warden

Commendations

21
Hey, I'm Ace. To do list: Escape triple shame Done: 7/5/22 Complete 25 well thought out reviews Progress: 15 Write a story with a rating above 5 Here is where I keep track of the stories I've reviewed. If I reviewed your story and you're curious as to the rating I gave it it's on there. Reviews

Storygames

A City Lost

This is a story about an artificer making his way through the world. Making choices who shape who he is and who he will become. With even his motives shifting based on his choices.

Authors Note:

This is an entry for EndMaster's prompt contest.

The prompt was, "This story’s protagonist is an artificer, magical blacksmith, or creator of magical weapons. You can translate this prompt to a sci-fi equivalent if you want."

I managed to make this story into a complete product with all the content I wanted in the time given, but I didn't have time to polish the prose much. Please leave any feedback you have. And just for fun make sure to include which of the nine epilogues you got or your favorite if you read multiple.


Bound by Light

This story is about a paladin who is on a quest to investigate an unkown evil out west, joined by a lighthearted mercanary.

Authors note: This story was made in a few days for Corgi's Lords of the land 2 contest. Not really proud of it, but it is what it is. Please leave any feedback you have in the reviews because while I know time could've improved the prose, the plot seems to be lacking something that I'm not sure of.


A Tale of Freedom and Chains
unpublished

Crime PG story
unpublished
dcas

Placeholder for story about PG
unpublished

No


The Candy Man
unpublished
paper slingers but with kids selling candy in boarding school

Recent Posts

The story I am writing is a doozy on 12/1/2024 11:09:46 AM
Don't worry, no offense taken, I just thought you were some random noob who I'd never spoken to insulting me lol.

The story I am writing is a doozy on 12/1/2024 10:33:06 AM
You entered this thread. You gave your take. Back it up. Change your mind if you're wrong. If you didn't come here to see what others have to say about your beliefs, why share them?

The story I am writing is a doozy on 12/1/2024 10:22:39 AM
Brother, I'm fine with people calling me fat, but who the hell are you? I think I've seen your name like twice ever. Figure you'd at least buy me some peanut butter with butter waffles or ramen before insulting me, smfh.

The story I am writing is a doozy on 12/1/2024 8:55:17 AM
I recall a shirtless ripped one when I was there years ago.

The story I am writing is a doozy on 11/30/2024 11:13:53 AM
I'm very glad to know that most "smart" christians don't believe in an absolutely literal interpretation of genesis. Like how do you even justify that?

The story I am writing is a doozy on 11/30/2024 3:08:54 AM
I know as I struggle with faith, my current position is that I think there's some kind of God and if that God is the Christian God and I keep my heart open I'll find my way to him eventually, I find it really hard to reconcile genuine facts and beliefs I have about the world with what the bible thumpers say. For instance, I have family members who think the earth is like 8000 years old, and I think that's fucking crazy, but if you take genesis completely literally that's the only logical conclusion. And there's a lot of crazy shit that is hard to believe actually happened, like the fact that Noah got EVERY animal on his arc, including every species of insect or whatever. And then there's the beliefs that I have to "These are beliefs of the Church, not God", because I genuinely can't believe in a God that views gay and trans people as abhorrent. Because I simply don't believe that is true, and therefore the idea that God thinks that has to either be wrong or the God can't exist, because I can't believe him to be all good otherwise. Even though my morality isn't what determines if he's all good. The best of both worlds on that point is my aunt who views being gay as a sin, but no more so than drinking or lying. I think that's the only way you can start and reconcile this.

What are you guys thankful for this Thanksgiving? on 11/29/2024 8:10:45 AM
I'm grateful to not be banned (currently)

2024 Holiday Gluttony thread on 11/28/2024 10:53:09 AM
Currently in Taiwan, so it isn't celebrated, but my program held a dinner at a resteraunt in celebration. It was nice and I had an excuse to dress up, which was fun. I had a burger (American food for Discover America Day), it had deep fried fish on top and a beef patty. It was big and thick, authetnic American expierence.

The story I am writing is a doozy on 11/27/2024 10:38:00 AM
I literally looked up if this was some kind of copypasta. Also, isn't your story better suited to Edutainment? I haven't read it, but from the premise it sounds like

Team Tertius on 11/26/2024 11:43:20 PM
Taylor tries to steal the pie, though she does so under the condition that if she succeeds she will give her item to the cook and take the pie, eating it herself, since she can no longer heal in battle. Assuming they agree to those terms, she’ll attempt to steal it. (There’s also the chance the pie heals everyone) She’s also very glad that FOR ONCE a skill other than might is being used