MrAce321, The Reader
4/21/2021 1:06 AM
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The Candy Man
paper slingers but with kids selling candy in school
Recent PostsRidicule the Noobs on 4/2/2021 2:13:03 PM
I just ignored it and stopped using the thing, or if I had too put everything like hot pockets on a plate. Eventually after about half a year she cleaned it because the landlord was coming for an inspection.
Ridicule the Noobs on 3/31/2021 2:41:47 AM
Ah, I wasn't as sure about the last one. I knew it was better than infierno even though that one translates to hell, but didn't know how much sense it made. I was a lot more concerned about the second one since I didn't find much on it online. I know the second one is apparently mexican, and think it is something like, hatefully calling someone a pain in the ass/calling them a stupid bastard.
Ridicule the Noobs on 3/31/2021 2:13:21 AM
As much as I despise dark, you're actually wrong. Assuming you aren't making a joke and are just being an insufferable prick. Allude: Suggest or call attention too Elude: Evade or escape from Ftfy
Ridicule the Noobs on 3/31/2021 1:42:36 AM
Really?! Man I even joined a spanish learning discord server to confirm my translation wasn't awful. Truly sad. And yeah, looking over it after publish the english was pretty bad. I tried to edit it, but that didn't happen e: I am actually intrested in where I went wrong with the spanish though, if you feel like sharing.
Ridicule the Noobs on 3/31/2021 1:31:34 AM
11 actually. At least get the numbers right smh. And dang, you ruined my edit. I was trying the fix some of the awful spelling errors E: And and as far as being infamous goes, my reputation has died down a lot. Something I'm thankful for, actually
Ridicule the Noobs on 3/31/2021 1:22:38 AM
The fool watched the deserter. He stood up on the podium of the town square and proclaimed for all to hear, "We must rise up! There are more of us than there are of them! If we work together as one force, we can destroy the admins , and take back CYStia! Enlist today, and stop the ridicule!" The fool laughed. He looked at the crowd listening. He noted a mix between sleeping 12 year olds, and eager 11 year olds. Neither would be of any use. Of course there were the regulars too. They made their own quips, he barely heard them. Listing that much was too much work. He caught a glimpse of mizal herself. She was walking with Enter back towards the castle. He turned to follow them inside, but was stopped at the gate. DarkSpawn. "What the hell are you doing here Serpent?" "My name is Ace, old friend." "Firstly we aren't friends. Secondly your name is Serpent. And thirdly, what in the Demonio are you doing back here." "I just wanted to hear what the people on the inside thought about this...coop?" "You've fallen so far as to join the retards it seems." "That is wrong on several accounts. First, there is no need for me to "join" the retards. I essentally refounded them. Secondly, you imply I stood high enough once to even be able to fall, which we both know isn't the case. And finally, hell no! You think me low enough to join *them*? You always did have a low opinion of me." He chuckled, "Point. But you do know what will happen if you go in there right? I can't stop you myself, but if you go in there you might even die." "More than enough reason to step aside then ay?" "Fine," he stepped aside, "Eres un pinche lata!" "English motherfucker" "Uh... it means... I wish you well." "Oh, thanks!" The fool then walked through the gates into the castle. Light flooded his vision as he stepped into the grand hall. God it had been so long. Nostalgia flooded over him and his eyes began to water, but he composed himself and walked on. As he snuck around, he heard a voice coming down the hallway. "They aren't even worth mocking. At least not until they make an effort. Then maybe they will be worth mock..." That sounded like mizal. Oh shit! He snapped out of it and ran to hide but as he turned she rounded the corner and saw him. "Ace. What do you think you are doing?" She stood there with Enter standing next to her. The giant man stood there with a piece of stone with paper on it, and a weighted pen that was labeled "120 lbs" on it. "Ah... haha... uh I was just looking for you!" "Oh really? Why would you come here for that. Surely you could have sent a message. Then I wouldn't be forced to reply to the likes of you and you wouldn't be caught in this situation." "Well I wasn't looking for you specificly... I uh just wanted to get the inside scoop on the whole noob army thing." "Ace you swore not to come back here..." "I was just here for a quick drop by to gather information, nothing more!" "For them?" "Oh my god no! Why does everyone assume I'm that retarded!" "Past evidence," she narrowed her eyes, "either way, another oath broken Ace." "Oh please. What's the point of even keeping oaths anymore. Like I'll be able to come back here anyway." She took a step forward, towering over him, "Careful now. We both know I can kill you." Her tone was cold, angry. A wave of defiance came over him, "How has that worked in the past for you?" As soon as the words escaped his lips he knew it was the wrong choice, her expression darkened, "Pray tell, who is the one who brought you back?" He body started quivering, his hands shaking, "Ah yes... a um... fair point," he took a step back, "you aren't going to lock me in the dungeons are you?" "The dungeons are too good for you. You belong on the streets. Leave here, and don't let me catch you here again." She turned to walked away He walked toward the exit, but stopped when he heard Enter speak, "You lift stone! Become strong! Yes?" He sighed, "Another time Enter," and kept walking. Out the castle door, past Dark, and to the rebels leader. "WYS!" he called out "General." "What?" "General WYS." "No. Anyway I came to see what this is all about." "Ah the infamous Ace! You don't seem like a noob." "I'm not. I'm in the very small group of people who aren't respected by the site, and have been here a long time. Most are either killed or leave." "What would be that groups name?" "Fools. I would dub them retards, but that apply's to so many other people. Fools fits just fine." "You embrace the mockery?!" "Ah I forgot your new to Cystia, or life in general really, so let me teach you something. If you whine at the mockers about them being mean, it doesn't do anything but encoruage and make you a faggot. But if you laugh with them, then you are slightly less of a faggot. A big win in my book." "You talk as if you have been here for a long time." "Longer than you've been alive. Well if you times the product by 3." "How long have you been here?" "About 3 years." "That's only 9!" "Yes. 9 is greater than 7 yeah? I didn't think you were bad at math too." "I'm not... Ah I see, you are one of them. You came here to laugh at us." "Sure did." "Why? You are one of us!" "Oh please. I will never be one of you. Your best shot is to become a fool like me, though there is no way you'll survive that long." He walked off, not listening to his rebuttal. God, what a pain to have to deal with them. He hoped they would be executed soon, at least then he could get some peace and quiet. He did like the excitment though. Exile could be so boring at times. Stuck with the faggots, people he couldn't relate with even though he was sort of one of them. There were people of status who resided outside the castle, but he'd already made enemies of them. Quite lonely, the life of the fool.
Google Slides & CYOAs on 3/21/2021 2:20:53 PM
1. Depends on your definition of tiny human 2. I wouldn't think I was smart, but looking at my peers and what I could be I would say yes, and same response to good 3. When I was a tiny human, 6th grade, I was in between Jeff account and MrAce being born and I made a remake of what would become life and death once I made MrAce
Thara's game on 3/20/2021 8:45:46 PM
Of all people to save...
10 more chapters? on 3/20/2021 4:48:18 PM
>writes 17000 in one day Please explain how there are not only enough hours in the day for this sort of thing, but how you manage more than 2k without having your brain fried and unable to write anything of value for the rest of the day. Oh and this is without mentioning the fact that you have no deadlines chasing you away from procrastination. Though some real questions I have are 1. How long do you plan this thing to be? 2. How many viewpoint characters do you plan to have? 3. Have you read any of the stormlight archive books? I finished the first one a few weeks back and it reminds me of your type of story. That being long epics with many characters. I will also add it took about 4 years of restarting, or a couple weeks on my latest attempt, to finish it and it is now my favorite book. I assume some of these might have already been answered, but I haven't seen them in this thread so I was just curouis. I'll probally give it a read after your trimming of arc one.
Malk's story on 3/18/2021 9:01:04 AM
Done, gave it an 8. I knew it was good, but wasn't aware it was top 100 material.