MrAce321, The Wordsmith

Member Since

11/19/2020

Last Activity

1/26/2023 5:16 PM

EXP Points

415

Post Count

162

Storygame Count

2

Duel Stats

18 wins / 5 losses

Order

Warden

Commendations

14
Hey, I'm Ace. To do list: Escape triple shame Done: 7/5/22 Complete 25 well thought out reviews Progress: 15 Write a story with a rating above 5 Here is where I keep track of the stories I've reviewed. If I reviewed your story and you're curious as to the rating I gave it it's on there. Reviews

Trophies Earned

Earning 100 Points

Storygames

A City Lost

This is a story about an artificer making his way through the world. Making choices who shape who he is and who he will become. With even his motives shifting based on his choices.

Authors Note:

This is an entry for EndMaster's prompt contest.

The prompt was, "This story’s protagonist is an artificer, magical blacksmith, or creator of magical weapons. You can translate this prompt to a sci-fi equivalent if you want."

I managed to make this story into a complete product with all the content I wanted in the time given, but I didn't have time to polish the prose much. Please leave any feedback you have. And just for fun make sure to include which of the nine epilogues you got or your favorite if you read multiple.


Bound by Light

This story is about a paladin who is on a quest to investigate an unkown evil out west, joined by a lighthearted mercanary.

Authors note: This story was made in a few days for Corgi's Lords of the land 2 contest. Not really proud of it, but it is what it is. Please leave any feedback you have in the reviews because while I know time could've improved the prose, the plot seems to be lacking something that I'm not sure of.


Crime PG story
unpublished
dcas

Placeholder for story about PG
unpublished

No


The Candy Man
unpublished
paper slingers but with kids selling candy in boarding school

Recent Posts

EndMaster's Prompt Contest 2 on 1/23/2023 9:09:25 PM
Huh, I was under the impression that I'd only be entered if I posted that I was considering joining the contest, but alright.

EndMaster's Prompt Contest 2 on 1/23/2023 3:16:13 PM
It was on my laptop and I don't typically watch anything on my laptop, so I never thought to have it off.

EndMaster's Prompt Contest 2 on 1/23/2023 10:31:14 AM
I clicked that link and played the first part of that outloud while in a lecture. Fuck you.

2023 resolutions on 1/21/2023 8:42:29 PM
My academic realted ones are going nicely, but the other ones are falling by the wayside. Currently taking 17 credit hours and a few of my classes are really scary, so I haven't really had much time to work on my other resolutions. Hoping to become better at my classes so I have time to do things like read or write reviews. The main thing I want to do that I haven't is work on my current writting project, since I get a lot of joy from it.

Cry the penguin on 1/13/2023 2:48:56 PM
Ah, I guess that's why I like peng. Because I'm used to using it on the other peng. He splipped my mind haha.

Cry the penguin on 1/13/2023 2:33:18 PM
I personally like peng, I don't see why he wouldn't tbh.

Page destinations on 1/12/2023 1:31:28 PM
Chapters are lame, I'd suggest putting everything into 1 chapter. The only thing a chapter does is make it so you see less pages at a time in the editor. Maybe for a big game that might be a good idea, but I'd say unless you have 100+ pages it's not a good idea. I'm sure there is a way, but I don't think it's worth figuring out.

Page destinations on 1/12/2023 12:48:07 PM
If I'm understanding your problem correctly, if you click "add link" instead of add link to new page there's an option to make the link go to previous page. E: Though if you go to other pages while in the menu page I'm not sure how they would interact. E2: Tested it, as long as you have go back links in the submenus you can use the go back link in the menu to get back to the story page.

Page destinations on 1/12/2023 12:30:09 PM
Here's a basic article on how to link pages to other pages if that's what you mean. https://chooseyourstory.com/help/articles/article.aspx?ArticleId=3 But if you mean something else we need more information on what you're trying to do.

2023 resolutions on 1/11/2023 11:40:59 AM
Thanks, you and Swift. I'll keep it all in mind when I'm (hopefully) down there. I think China itself is off the table and even if it wasn't I don't choose if I go to China and Taiwan. But the mainland is definitely a place I'd like to visit, once I know the language and all.