MrAce321, The Reader

Member Since

11/19/2020

Last Activity

6/22/2024 1:48 AM

EXP Points

0

Post Count

415

Storygame Count

2

Duel Stats

19 wins / 8 losses

Order

Warden

Commendations

20
Hey, I'm Ace. To do list: Escape triple shame Done: 7/5/22 Complete 25 well thought out reviews Progress: 15 Write a story with a rating above 5 Here is where I keep track of the stories I've reviewed. If I reviewed your story and you're curious as to the rating I gave it it's on there. Reviews

Storygames

A City Lost

This is a story about an artificer making his way through the world. Making choices who shape who he is and who he will become. With even his motives shifting based on his choices.

Authors Note:

This is an entry for EndMaster's prompt contest.

The prompt was, "This story’s protagonist is an artificer, magical blacksmith, or creator of magical weapons. You can translate this prompt to a sci-fi equivalent if you want."

I managed to make this story into a complete product with all the content I wanted in the time given, but I didn't have time to polish the prose much. Please leave any feedback you have. And just for fun make sure to include which of the nine epilogues you got or your favorite if you read multiple.


Bound by Light

This story is about a paladin who is on a quest to investigate an unkown evil out west, joined by a lighthearted mercanary.

Authors note: This story was made in a few days for Corgi's Lords of the land 2 contest. Not really proud of it, but it is what it is. Please leave any feedback you have in the reviews because while I know time could've improved the prose, the plot seems to be lacking something that I'm not sure of.


A Tale of Freedom and Chains
unpublished

Crime PG story
unpublished
dcas

Placeholder for story about PG
unpublished

No


The Candy Man
unpublished
paper slingers but with kids selling candy in boarding school

the mystery man
unpublished , coauthor

you play as a 69 year old (you decide their gender [their name is put with the selected gender] before the story starts) who has a mysterious visitor show up at their door at 5:29 AM every day. YOU and only YOU must find out who (or what) this mysterious visitor is or else...


Recent Posts

POV modes on 6/21/2024 3:30:12 PM
I think third person works perfectly fine. I find second person to be fun myself, especially because this is one of the only mediums you can use it in, but third person isn't bad. First person might be challenging, but it should be fine.

What Are Orders? on 6/19/2024 5:24:22 PM
That should've been boobs smh

What Are Orders? on 6/17/2024 8:18:10 PM
I bet that guy has a really big pen, actually.

What Are Orders? on 6/17/2024 7:05:10 PM
I will say though, Marauders have more members pulling their weight it seems. If you ignore End completely Marauders are second place, well ahead of sages and losing to architects by like 40 points. Ignoring end and ninja, they're still within 500 of sages, which 500 may seem like a lot, but it's comparing 6100 to 6600. Also, their 20th member has 136 coms whereas sage's 20th member only has 69. I remember back before story comming sage's were THE order, and I will say, they're probably more well rounded than the architects.

What Are Orders? on 6/16/2024 8:55:00 PM
Rude.

What Are Orders? on 6/16/2024 8:50:11 PM
Our top three are a dead guy who wrote one series, a banned guy who to my knowledge owes his coms to a war with Thara to amass as many as possible, and another dead guy who's been around longer than even mizal. It says something that out of the 20 top members only 4 are active on the forums. Not counting Romulus since he hasn't posted in 4 years. E: Never mind, I thought Chris had a review war with Thara for some reason, but I guess I'm remembering my history wrong

What Are Orders? on 6/15/2024 11:55:23 PM
If you're doing summer college classes, then you're at least 16. Meaning... wow. Holy shit.

What Are Orders? on 6/15/2024 1:20:14 AM
That's a crazy idea, you should write a story about murdering him

Article titled Mr. published under articles on 6/14/2024 7:58:21 PM
In his points page, he has been awarded points for writing 8 different articles. There are 7 that show up on his profile, and none of them are the Mr article. It's odd that this Mr article doesn't show up on his profile.

What Are Orders? on 6/14/2024 1:48:46 PM
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