6/27/2025

7/25/2025 4:25 PM

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Marauder

I'm writing my first story rn and I wish there was some sort of way to reorder the existing pages. I use pages to outline the branching before writing. There have been a few times that I've wanted to add a new page or choice in the middle of a chapter and had to delete the whole chapter and all its pages to do it. There could be a drag handle mechanism on the side next to the preview and delete buttons for each page to reorder them. If I'm missing a feature that already exists and would allow me to do this, let me know.

thanks so much. I'll def have to go back and edit when it comes to the POV. i appreciate the suggestion, too. I'll have to look into that and consider where it could fit best. i have lots of plan for the story so im not sure how long it'll take me to finish. its really motivating to hear that youre looking forward to reading it in its finsihed form! thanks for adding that.

thanks for pointing that out! let me know if you see it anywhere else. I'd love to hear what you think about the story itself and the choices too when you've read some more. edit: those code issues should be fixed! thanks again for pointing it out. you've definitely been a great help so far.

im in the same position! I've checked out some stories anonymously over the years and decided to start developing a story myself recently! I'll look forward to any story you have to tell! :)

thanks for all the feedback, I really appreciate it! I'm going to keep working on it. Those smaller decisions at the beginning do play a pretty big role in avoiding/unlocking some of the endings later in the story but I can see where you're coming from. I'll keep that I'm mind going forward. thanks again!

I posted yesterday but thought i should post again bc my story is now in sneak peak mode so everyone can view. thanks to anyone that reads, let me know what you think here! edit: I guess sneak peak doesnt let you view the pages? lmk if you want to proofread and ill add you as a coauthor.

i put it in sneak peek mode! sry about taking so long lol edit: i think i need to add you as a coauthor. ill just go ahead and do that.

lmaoo

I'm not really sure what the process is here for proofreaders but I need a few for a new story I'm developing. I'm only about three chapters in but here is the premise so far: A zombie/monster survival story. Player is a young woman that is trying to find her friends across the city. I read Dead Man Walking, and it's similar but set at a slower pace i think. I mainly need proofreaders that will play multiple times and test out different endings. I want to both make sure the writing is alright and that the code is working, because there are lots of variables and restrictions. As you read, just let me know your general thoughts and if you find any bugs. (If you like it, feel free to suggest story elements to add in later chapters. I want to write what the people want to read!) If you're interested, message me I guess. Or leave a comment and we can figure out how to do this. I'm honestly not even really sure how to make my story visible to proofreaders without publishing so let me know that process as well if you can.

ohhh ok, this makes sense, ty