12/10/2023

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Sage

Chillin' in the Park

unpublished

You are chillin' in the park. (Unpublished for good, although I would like to say to TCat I thought I did correct the grammatical errors in the story, and would like to know where I didn't correct them. A sequel will be released shortly, and hopefully an improvement on this story.) Edit: nevermind, fuck that. Nothing like this will ever be attempted by me again. This story will not be deleted just so I know exactly what not to write.

Wrote some more late night poetry, would appreciate any feedback. Watching the Moon I watch the moon They call my name from beyond the dark Tempting me to look away from the glowing arc Yet I watch the moon Sand pelts my back in a swirling attack Trying to get me to look back Yet I watch the moon I stare all night Never averting my sight As I dedicate to its light The moon just watches me

I think she can speak for herself if that offends her, it's not like she's an ALLF.

No, they cancel each other out. Double negatives make a positive, so you test positive for AIDS and die. So in conclusion, you can just not for long.

Speaking of her, I always wondered why she changed from Briar to Avery, I must have missed that episode.

Join the contest, we need only one more person. I gave a list of prompts and you have about a month left to write.

The first five, I realized the class was almost up and I didn't want to bring it to another class so I told some chatbot to finish the list and I looked it over briefly. Why, is it a bad list?

No excuses anymore, twenty one ideas right here for people who are struggling. 1. The protagonist's life is turned upside down when they receive a terminal diagnosis. 2. After a car accident, the protagonist is left to navigate life with a permanent disability. 3. The sudden death of a loved one forces the protagonist to reevaluate their life choices. 4. The protagonist is betrayed by a close friend, leaving them questioning who to trust. 5. The protagonist’s family moves across the country, uprooting their life and relationships. 6. A breakup shatters the protagonist’s sense of self, pushing them into emotional turmoil. 7. The protagonist’s best friend gets married, and they feel left behind. 8. A natural disaster destroys the protagonist’s home, forcing them to rebuild from scratch. 9. The protagonist’s sibling goes missing, and they must deal with the emotional fallout. 10. The protagonist's parents get divorced, forcing them to choose sides. 11. The protagonist loses their sense of identity after a severe injury changes their appearance. 12. The protagonist’s child is diagnosed with a rare illness, and they must navigate the medical world. 13. A lifelong dream is dashed when the protagonist suffers an unexpected physical setback. 14. After witnessing a crime, the protagonist must deal with trauma and fear of retaliation. 15. The protagonist discovers they were adopted, leading them on a journey of self-discovery. 16. The protagonist is abandoned by their partner, leaving them to rebuild their life alone. 17. The protagonist’s romantic partner cheats, and they must confront the end of the relationship. 18. After being diagnosed with a mental health condition, the protagonist struggles to accept it. 19. The protagonist’s life is forever changed after they become the caretaker of a terminally ill parent. 20. A house fire leaves the protagonist without a home or possessions. 21. The protagonist loses their memory after an accident, struggling to reconnect with their past.

Google says it did.

At least he wrote your name right.

Most of the noobs we're getting are Wardens, so if you write a lot you might be able to get to the top of your faction.