Player Comments on Fantasy Tales- Namariel's Story ~Chapter 1~

Please make another one!

— Il_Maestro on 8/31/2013 5:11:35 PM with a score of 0

Nice story...if it was a short standalone.

I'm not particularly fond of Chapters, mainly because my choices won't affect much of the next chapter unless there was a path specifically tailored for my events prior to the next chapter.

From the look of it, I'd say that our choices won't affect us players much in the next chapter.

— Swiftstryker on 8/7/2013 4:38:58 AM with a score of 0

Best story I've ever read! I love it! ^^

— sexysally on 8/5/2013 2:52:02 AM with a score of 0

It was a fun game.

— walker on 8/3/2013 10:00:17 PM with a score of 0

I liked this game. the story was good, the characters had some depth, and the results made sense (no "lol actually teh door falls on yur hed. u die.") Nicely done storygame! I look forward to chapter two!

— MagmaArmor0 on 7/31/2013 5:35:03 AM with a score of 0

Now this is a game where chapter two is for looking forward two!

— galobtter on 7/30/2013 9:56:13 AM with a score of 0

You have a nice sturdy story. The only major concern I had with reading it was with the execution rather than the quality or quantity of the work itself.