Player Comments on Goldbird and Whispers of Snow

This had real promise, but most choices lead to the same place. There's very little player control, which is too bad.

This is well written and should have a lot more reviews than it does - the writing is good and flows well, the settings are interesting and the characterisation is good. Not much else to say, on the whole this is just an interesting and well written story that more people should read!

This is good for what it is