Player Comments on Looped

Oh, I just remembered that Ogre11 did something a bit similar but in a dystopian style in Dark Night (Noir). If you're interested in this genre you might want to check it out.

Ok, the old time loop thing. When this is done well it can be very good (Groundhog Day, Palm Springs) so let’s give this a whirl. Are you sure it’s a time loop and not just a typical town with everyone going through the same routines? Alright, this was a weird one. I wandered into a forest to look for animals, found one and broke the time loop (which is typically broken by assuming a genuinely altruistic lifestyle or mastering science). So, a bit random.

Well, there were no SPAG errors, the writing on the first page was promising and the paragraphs all made sense. I assume there was a bit of branching in this but a lot more can be done with this genre than a bunch of random choices, I particularly didn’t like the loop being broken for no apparent reason. This was an ok first story by a new member so I won’t review bomb it too harshly but you might want to explore this genre more and develop the story more. I’ll give it a 3/8 for now.