Player Comments on Man In The Mirror

It's hard to tell the actual writing quality when I'm just dumping it into Google translate, but this was *extremely* short, and since you left blank pages in there without even removing the default 'this is a new page' text I'm unpublishing this for being incomplete.

It's okay to post stories in other languages despite what the comments said, but it will likely hurt your rating overall. If this was intended for a few friends or teachers or someone you know IRL, you can leave the 'Sneak Peek' box checked in the storygame settings and just share the URL with them without exposing it to public ratings or feedback.

English please. :^)

I have no idea what happened before this tidbit of the story takes place and can't really tell where it will head from here.

Looks like you had to add in several blank pages to even publish so that should've given you a clue.

My advice would be to not published unfinished stories.