Player Comments on On The Road...

This is a good story, I hope you keep writing more.
I like the part "you see a corpse beside you, dead." Ordinarily I'd say that since a corpse is a dead body by definition, that you don't need to tell us it's dead. But when I thought about it, at least I knew it wasn't a zombie. Good story.

It's good enough, but a bit on the short side.
Grammar was alright, with a few mistakes here and there, but nothing major.
The plot of the story is enough to keep the reader interested for long enough. I was suprised by the amount of choices given to me, and the sentances were written well.
4/8, It's worth to be read at least once.

Pretty entertaining story, reminded me of a traveler's first night on his adventure in a much larger story. Felt like it could have been expanded upon if you choose to stay in the inn, but it could be larger in the other paths (which I have yet to investigate). 4/8