Player Comments on Planetshakers

Interesting and well-written story. Taking the trope of isolated parent/child survival and telling it from an alien perspective is a fun twist. Your descriptions are nice and punchy and you do a good job painting the scene.

There are several places where you reference the alien's "face", but I'm not sure how that concept applies if they just have masses of sils growing from their upper torso.

**SPOILER**
In the slaver ending, it doesn't make sense why the grenade would be so damaging if your sili can instantly armor like they do elsewhere.

The lack of a real ending for the other option in the village is pretty disappointing, I have to agree.

I gave this a 7/8 originally, and I went through it again with the intention of changing that to an 8. Though I may be biased because I was the proofreader. Then, I stumbled across this.

"Sike nigga there ain't no final battle because I ran out of time hohoho enjoy your point pls don't hurt me."

You couldn't even pull together a two minute "and then the gods decide you are a terrible Zayark and smite you."? Really, Wizzy?

Fuck you, I'm giving this a 1.