Player Comments on Proof of writing
There is some atmosphere building up here, clearly leading to a horrific climax, but some game mechanics leave me circling aimlessly, being chased by the nameless creature.
It's a good way to build the story- describing in a limited, strange vocabulary, hinting at the time and place and history that may have led to this. No spoilers from me! But if the writer can complete this story with a fitting ending, I'd be willing to rate it much higher.
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JohnX
on 1/17/2025 8:09:51 PM with a score of 0
This story seems to be incomplete. Either there is an unexpected ending, or I get stuck in a loop where I'm being "Hunted", which does offer some ways out, but those only lead to the "Hunted" page again.
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Kurt_Woloch
on 1/17/2025 1:07:30 PM with a score of 0
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