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im dead /:
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— me on 3/21/2018 3:43:25 PM with a score of 0
Well I died!!!
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— Taylor Houck on 3/21/2018 3:41:58 PM with a score of 0
You wrote a poor man's version of The Hatchet. And you didn't even bother to capitalize the start of your sentences.
What was the point?
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Bucky
on 3/21/2018 9:31:03 AM with a score of 0
This is literally just the tl;dr version of Hatchet. The character even magically pulls a never previously mentioned hatchet out of his ass after the crash.
Pro tip: the beginnings of sentences are supposed to be capitalized.
Not a bad story concept but it needs more substance and a plot that's less of an obvious rip off. Or at least move it to fanfic.
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Mizal
on 3/21/2018 7:35:16 AM with a score of 0
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