Player Comments on The Adventures of Steve

What the hell?
So many holes!?Why?

— TitanOfShadows on 1/15/2016 1:46:02 PM with a score of 0

very good amount of choices, though you need more descriptions. And there are a few grammatical and spelling errors.

— SonicTurboTurtle on 10/18/2015 11:21:06 AM with a score of 0

Lovley

— Louis on 8/9/2015 6:49:36 PM with a score of 0

I died in heaven after being smothered by a bunch of Teletubbies. This game is... three periods in a row. That's really all you can say about it. Well, you could also say that grammar is okay-ish, the story makes zero sense, and it's needlessly offensive with no real humor, but nah.

— GMB13carat on 7/16/2015 10:29:17 PM with a score of 0

One of those random stories that try to be funny. . . I'm gonna tell you the truth. I didn't like this one bit.

— Penworth on 6/13/2015 6:02:40 AM with a score of 0

it's so weird

— tiffanyclarke123 on 4/1/2015 2:36:52 PM with a score of 0

That is disgusting! Shrek... Shrek... Shrek... Shrek... Shrek... Shrek... Hey Mr. Shrek!

— Boringfirelion on 12/3/2014 7:08:15 PM with a score of 0

It's random, not super funny, there's no story, your actions mean nothing, and I swear to God, every ending ends with you falling in a hole and dying.

— Brewstone on 7/23/2014 2:46:08 PM with a score of 0

I'm starting to notice a correlation between games that let you summon Chuck Norris and games that suck...

— ISentinelPenguinI on 7/21/2014 9:40:08 PM with a score of 0

One of the stupidest storygames on the site. This was obviously put together in about 20 minutes, and the writer has no clue how to write, to create any sort of atmosphere. This is obviously a troll game, and should be disregarded, unless you like some random events sandwiched together by the constant pornographic details. 2/8

— PortalSpartan on 7/21/2014 7:02:41 PM with a score of 0

WTF? this is so inappropriate and poorly written

— SHREK on 7/20/2014 12:28:33 AM with a score of 0

Shrek is love, Shrek is life.

You need to make more original humor material.

— Tanstaafl on 7/17/2014 4:20:00 PM with a score of 0

At the very least, it's not linear...
But, it's also pretty obvious that you slapped this together in only a matter of days at the most. I ran into quite a few instances where links looped back to pages I had already been, I don't believe you put any real effort into what you little writing you did. There were a lot of pages with only one or two sentences on them.
My suggestion would be to get at least 8 sentences on every page, or even set a word minimum for yourself, and fix the issues where links loop forever in some cases.