Player Comments on The K.I.L.L?

I don't always agree with Alien Alpha, but when I do, it's usually a bad thing. I hope English isn't your first language. You need to edit your stories. If you want to write a good story game answer the questions Who? What? When? Where? and Why? Give us an idea of what is going on, why it is going on, where it is happening, when some key events happened, who we are and who the other important characters are. We really don't have any of that.

Randomness is good in short supply, but you just drowned your story with it. I found it wet and sloppy from the submersion of the random events thrown in.

I gave it a 2, because the game was too linear and the writing was not too good. Grammatical errors everywhere. Also, it was way too short. Good try though.

Rate 4/8 or higher and i will make more

It is pretty good but you got to be the one that try.