Player Comments on The Life of a Child in Foster-Care

There's nothing actually wrong with this, but the site is more for real stories that are entertaining in some fashion. With school projects or something otherwise intended for a small, specific audience, you can leave them in Sneak Peek (the option is in Storygame Settings) and just share the URL with anyone you want.

Dunno if you've noticed, but not the best venue for school projects. Maybe if you'd made it into a self-aware quiz where you're reading the questions and answering them AS a foster child, it could've worked.

So am I the only one upset about how WWII ended? I mean they built Hitler up to be the big bad and just when he is about to face justice, he goes and kills himself. WTF was the point of him if FDR and Churchill were not going to fight him in an epic duel to save the world? And don't get me started on FDR! They just kill him half way through the war. Truman totally did not deserve to win the war, his character arc was not about war winning. And it certainly wasn't about destroying two cities with bullshit deus ex super weapons that came out of no where.

And another thing that pissed me off is that in the last episode of the war we find out that Stalin was a bad guy the entire time! Where was this foreshadowed to us? WTF, absolute character assassination. He was all about freeing the oppressed and bringing about a new system that wasn't shackling the poor and they made him a dictator? That is bullshit!

Anyways, WWII was cool but its end was absolutely trash and I would like you guys to sign a petition to have it rewritten.

Thanks for the point btw