Player Comments on The Matching CHAPTER 0NE
I was not a fan of this. The (insert nickname) thing really was terrible. Also was it just me or was the formatting weird. It felt like there was too much space between the lines. Overall unfortunately, I can not recommend this story to anyone.
on 11/18/2020 3:39:05 PM with a score of 0
I like the idea but the ending...I can't even call it a cliffhanger. I just don't get it. It's unfinished I guess
— swimminnarwhals on 10/27/2017 9:25:41 PM with a score of 0
Would it not kill you to give the reader a name? Or if you really don't want to give them one, then just leave that part out altogether?
on 8/2/2017 5:54:03 AM with a score of 0
just bad just really bad just stay away from this horrid story
— Max on 6/10/2016 8:14:21 AM with a score of 0
It started with one person and then ended with another. What the hell?
— Jay on 10/26/2014 6:01:01 PM with a score of 0
Constantly having (Your Nickname), (Your First Name), really broke the little immersion I had.
on 1/26/2014 1:28:15 PM with a score of 0
The pictures and large paragraphs can't hide the fact that this story is just The City of Bones with Clary's name replaced with "Your First Name".
on 1/21/2014 5:33:54 PM with a score of 0
I gave it the two, because I was having a bias.
The bias was currently "All fan fictions are terrible"
I re read it.
Still not my cup of tea, though not /bad/
Gave it a four, because its the middle man. It isn't bad, but it isn't /good/ to me.
on 1/21/2014 3:59:04 PM with a score of 0
Not a Bad Story to be `Onest, who rate this 2 think just clicking through the story, 6/8
on 1/21/2014 2:49:16 PM with a score of 0