Axxius, The Dramatist

Member Since

3/15/2018

Last Activity

3/3/2024 11:46 AM

EXP Points

721

Post Count

100

Storygame Count

1

Duel Stats

5 wins / 8 losses

Order

Sage

Commendations

90

Hey! You! Don't click away! I wrote a story game so go check it out and give me feedback. :D 

 

Trophies Earned

Earning 100 Points Earning 500 Points Having 1 Storygame(s) Featured Given by BerkaZerka on 03/16/2023 - It was a drive by Trophying

Storygames

Featured Story The Christmas Crossing

     A seemingly hopeless winter falls on you and your regiment as you lie in wait at Valley Forge. You are tired, your shoes are nearly worn and the smell of death and disease lays heavy on the camp. Rumor has it Washington is planning something before year's end. Personally, you think he's going to surrender. Only one way to find out. You trudge through the peppermint-colored snow around the doctor's tents as you make your way to the officers' cabins. 

     In this story, you step into the role of a soldier in the American Revolution at one of the key turning points in the war as you participate in the battle of Trenton and witness the events firsthand. 


Alpha Centauri
unpublished

Following your father's legacy, you step into the role of a Captain. The leader of an expedition into the far reaches of space in search of a fertile planet worth colonizing.

Your expectations to uncover old artifacts and resources left behind by possible alien life are blown away when you and your team discover far more than you ever intended to find.

 

An entry for EndMaster's Prompt Contest.


Children of Cain
unpublished

Being marked is not a promising existence and that's something the Children of Cain know better than anyone else. Matthias wanders back to the land of his progenitor to claim an inheritance that should've been his. Welp, this is what I got ladies and gents. 

For this contest PRAISE ENDMASTER.


Knights of the Phoenix
unpublished

When an important King goes missing, it's up to you to steal the only magical artifact that may be capable of finding him. You must accomplish this while navigating the politics of your organization, the whims of your client, and about a half dozen things trying to kill you daily.

For the Corgi contest...


The Way of the Magician
unpublished

Entry for Mizal's 2020 Jungle Contest.

You are Stor Pendelhaven. a Half-Orc boy who has a natural prowess in the arcane arts. Your parents have enrolled you in the Lynalia Academy. A magic school created under the joint effort of the Factions to promote unity and prosperity. What path will you take in this compelling adventure? 


Recent Posts

Admin Abuse? Call now! on 9/19/2023 5:50:10 PM

The admins are all amazing people and I don't even know why this hotline exists.


The Golden Dragon Series on 8/4/2023 11:43:03 AM

Thanks for reviewing this series! haven't heard about game books until now so I ordered the two you recommended as the best in the series to try them out myself.


Sentinel's MONUMENT OF BLOODSHED AND INIMICALITY on 7/10/2023 8:40:50 PM

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Sentinel's MONUMENT OF BLOODSHED AND INIMICALITY on 7/10/2023 8:33:32 PM

Wtf, the original trilogy had aged far better than the Disney sequels. This is an abysmal take to have.


Sentinel's MONUMENT OF BLOODSHED AND INIMICALITY on 7/10/2023 8:32:21 PM

Actually I liked 8 because at least it tried to be different from the ones Abrams did which just felt like soulless remakes. That being said, all of the ways it tried to be different were pretty stupid.


Sentinel's MONUMENT OF BLOODSHED AND INIMICALITY on 7/10/2023 6:18:55 PM

Bubly is a nice sparkling water to drink chilling by the lake or the beach. It's got just the right amount of carbonation and flavor. I'm more a newcomer to seltzers but whenever I drink a La Croix it feels like I'm squeezing lime directly in my nasal cavity. I do like the pamplemousse flavor though.


Sentinel's MONUMENT OF BLOODSHED AND INIMICALITY on 7/10/2023 11:12:50 AM

I just came here to say Bubly is not an option and my disappointment is immeasurable. You can all choke and die on your high fructose corn syrup sodas you fat, disgusting, polyhedrons destined for liver failure. I'll take the quiz later when I've got time. 


Thunderdome 4: Wizzy vs Ace on 5/8/2023 3:05:35 PM

My thoughts:

Both stories in my mind nailed the Clone dynamics with each other. Though they're the same person they all have certain things that set them apart from one another and make them really unique. This was the strongest aspect of both entries. The action was well executed. Story A had more vivid descriptions but Story B had stronger dialogue.  Story A's ending left more to be desired. If you haven't watched the Clone Wars tv show you aren't going to know who Savage Opress is and it doesn't add much to the story shoehorning him in at the end. Had there been some foreshadowing of a Sith assassin near the beginning of the story I think it would have strengthened your ending significantly. My only problem with Story B's ending was how the Jedi knew about Knives's inhibitor chip and that it had malfunctioned. All I got to say is that the Jedi was really lucky the clone decided to turn on his squad despite the chip malfunction during Order 66.

Both Stories were great but I think Story B squeezes out the win for this particular duel.    


Reading Competition on 4/19/2023 7:16:39 PM

I would participate. I agree with the idea of adjusting points based on story length. Otherwise everyone would review the shortest stories on the site.


Songbird Editor - A new tool for IF writers on 4/19/2023 2:15:57 PM

Is it safe to install the editor?