DireRyse, The Contributor

Member Since

2/22/2018

Last Activity

5/24/2022 12:03 PM

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176

Post Count

53

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0

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0 wins / 0 losses

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Sage

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7

Welcome to my Profile! It's pretty barren and empty right now but I'm hoping to change that in the near future!

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Storygames

The Fallen Gods: Siege at Aurella
unpublished

The gods of the realm fall silent as the Lahrian Kingdom spreads the following of The True God across the land. The Inquisitor's army has been sieging the city of Aurella for three weeks now. Your army grows restless at it seeks to purge the heretics inside it's gates. Will you destroy the city in the name of your god through slaughter, or will you find another way? 


Recent Posts

it's reining, it's pouring! on 2/24/2022 2:05:27 PM

Welcome to site!

Now that it's "reining and pouring" could you confirm whether or not the old man is, in fact, snoring?


Agreena results on 2/6/2022 8:59:42 AM

Congrats to everyone that isn't shamed. SHAME on those who failed, especially a certain someone. Also congrats to honorable mentions!


Agreena results on 2/6/2022 8:58:19 AM

Thanks for the review Green! And thanks again for judging all these stories. We all appreciate the effort you put in your feedback. I could see how the divorce line could be cut. Lovecraft loves his substance abuse, so I wanted to add it in since it is often shown in his stories. For the sake of the contest, those words could have been better used. That's usually the problem I have with a word limit. I'll keep working on it. Glad you enjoyed it though! Also, I'll be sure to add racism next time.


New member here on 1/26/2022 8:31:30 PM

Welcome to the site. Don't forget to help out the community by rating and reviewing stories, or contribute yourself. There is plenty of articles written to help you out. 


Begging for Life on 1/25/2022 1:54:19 PM

Have you tried going outside and touching the grass? Might help you out.

lol fag.


My first short story on 1/18/2022 8:44:41 PM

At first reading through, I thought it was going to be a metaphor of how people wear "faces" to hide their true self. Little did I know, its actually a race of [unintelligible]. I think this idea needs a few more world building aspects to solidify for the reader why any of this is happening. Is it because the character is curious? Is it rebellion? Both of them are hinted at, but no real grip motivates the story. Don't get me wrong, it is interesting and I liked the ending. It would just benefit the story as a whole if more detail was given. 

Also curious if the [unintelligible] are their own society or hide in human society. Either way, very interesting idea you have.


Is it okay to say hi? on 1/18/2022 8:36:19 PM

Welcome to the site! Like said above, feedback is always welcome and there are articles on the site that can help you grow as a writer. If you have any short stories or looking to spit ball some ideas, don't be afraid to post in the forum. You'll find lots of help in the form of constructive criticism.


hi im new on 1/16/2022 9:08:52 PM

We see you. All of us. 


Ebon’s duels (welcome to the Agreena): on 1/16/2022 8:30:54 PM

As an average lovecraft enjoyer, I think I'll join in on the fun. Last year, I was writing a lovecraftian CYOA on here but I never got around to finish it, so this will be fun to get back into that mindset.

Don't forget it isn't lovecraft if it doesn't have racism.


Star Wars Tatooine Exploration Sim: Ideas/Requests on 1/16/2022 1:00:20 PM

A Jawa Sandcrawler adventure is what the people deserve.