You have dedicated years of your life working to prove the existence of a hidden pharaoh - someone who has pulled the strings of Ancient Egypt from the shadows, Kannok. Will you delve into the tomb and be successful, or will this just be another piece of history lost to time?

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This is my submissions for End Master’s Prompt Contest 3. Any and all feedback is welcomed and appreciated.

The gods of the realm fall silent as the Lahrian Kingdom spreads the following of The True God across the land. The Inquisitor's army has been sieging the city of Aurella for three weeks now. Your army grows restless at it seeks to purge the heretics inside it's gates. Will you destroy the city in the name of your god through slaughter, or will you find another way? 

One should be Ogre

No problem! 

Is it suppose to just be a conversation? I think it would be much stronger if you characterized them. What are they doing at this very moment. These non-verbal movements can carry weight and change an entire scene. My default is they are just standing in a room talking to each other without moving. The dialogue itself is fine, pretty dramatic type of love interpretation imo. They stand there staring at each other and just speak the words - probably not your intention but taking the time to set the scene will greatly improve this.

TLDR;

Non-verbal movements/ information - these can even help with the tone in which they talk. Are they standing straight up, is #1 confident in how he says "I think I love you" or are his shoulders slouched, staring at the ground - almost afraid to say it

That is a solid statement. You got my vote.

My vote goes to B.

waha

It's tough to NOT like Ogre.

Besides EndMaster's stories, my top 3 are:

Agent of Order by Mizal

The Book of Vanishing Tales by Camelon

The Shameful Dead by Fluxion

I think I got around 400 hrs in Fallout 4

What about MLMs?