Player Comments on The Robots United : Part Two

Not quite linear as the first one, but change the font. You wrote this in classic, with the basic text editor. switch to rich text. Also, the plot has no starting point. Why would aliens bother with robots? what are the aliens like? At least a Synopsis would be good. and the battles...

— Rommel on 3/31/2007 6:37:52 PM with a score of 0

Better than the first one. Those errors in tense and conjugation are still present. With all due respect, is English not your first language? A lot of the mistakes are made by people who don't have English as a first lang. Just wondering. Good job!

— madglee on 9/5/2006 4:46:09 PM with a score of 100

Why didn't you just combine the two games and make it a BIG game. You didn't and there's also no closure, because you didn't write part 3.

I also don't like robots, but that's a me problem.

— Darius_Conwright on 11/7/2022 1:02:45 PM with a score of 0

Wow.... no good ending, only if Sera wasn't a alien...

Poor Unknown (Again)

— Guest on 11/17/2018 9:50:00 AM with a score of 0

It wasn't poorly written, but it need some more story. There wasn't a lot of explanation after the beginning.

— Maxz92 on 10/8/2015 9:45:22 AM with a score of 0

A bit better in linearity, but way too short.Ah well, a bit more background would be nice. More plot and character development. Keep at it!

— ChaiHai on 8/12/2012 6:27:10 AM with a score of 0

Interesting i guess.

— CovElite on 5/15/2012 10:18:26 AM with a score of 0

good but why have u pick up stuff and then end the game?>

— DarkentityOni on 9/11/2011 1:14:54 AM with a score of 0

didn't like the story line but it was good with grammar and spelling and stuff

— bradhal on 5/1/2011 4:50:23 AM with a score of 0

I'm not sure...I used to have so much ideas for this series, but then it got all washed away..somehow..

— GodsSlayer on 12/31/2006 5:48:55 PM with a score of 0

A lot like the last, but with less grammar and spelling mistakes. Are you going to write the third one?

— October on 12/30/2006 4:24:41 AM with a score of 0

Good storyline, but you lack grammar. That's the only problem..

— 000 on 9/19/2006 12:34:54 AM with a score of 0

You're right! I do put in too much, so I will shorten it on my next game, and write more for the story! Thanks!

— GodsSlayer on 7/9/2006 6:06:07 PM with a score of 0

you have a strong ability for writing. i just wish you would take more time and worry about story rather than features.

— nate on 7/7/2006 3:43:01 PM with a score of 100

good game, not the best,but certainly not the worst, so okay game, just work harder,and then it'll be more better!

— simpsons on 6/20/2006 9:58:00 PM with a score of 0

ok.

— on 6/11/2006 9:15:21 PM with a score of 0

meh, ok. Borrowed way too much off StarCraft, like usual.

— JJJ-thebanisher on 6/11/2006 3:31:57 AM with a score of 0

Ok game.

— on 6/9/2006 6:44:52 PM with a score of 0

Oh! It's probably because of the maze. I made an error for that part and now it made the length to 6.

— GodsSlayer on 4/12/2006 9:47:46 PM with a score of 100

WHAT?! Length 6?! It's not even that long! It should be length 4 or 5.

And just to tell you, it is seriously not that long. It's short.

— GodsSlayer on 4/12/2006 9:36:16 PM with a score of 0