Player Comments on Zombies r ME!

I like the fact that you are doing a different type of zombie story. I respect that. The title actually made me expect it to be like ArrowzworrA's game (kinda trollish/spammish with terrible English and no plot etc.) But I was happily surprised. After reading the story the title makes sense.
Sadly, it didn't seem finish, with one or more paths that don't have links attached to them. Also, a little bit of grammar mistakes aren't much of a problem, but a LOT of them in cluttered paragraphs make it. Annoying to read.
Still, games like this should be made more, and I'm glad you didn't make another one of those zombie survival story with nothing new to offer.

Was Very Descent I would love to continue this if it wasn't so short Make some awesome things happen for joe have a good one

Yey! There's so many zombie games on CYS, and I keep saying that somebody should be original and make a game from the point of view of the zombie... And now you did! It could do with a proofreading though.

Noo!!! Martin!!! WHY??? :'( And yes, totally carry on with it

Good, I would have liked to eat something though, also vary short.
First I've been a zombie, usualy I just shoot them with assorted equipment.

Pretty good, but some pages don't have links

Reminds me quite a lot of the movie and book "Warm Bodies" (though the movie and book are relatively different).

To turn that kind of story into a CYS would be quite interesting, but fixing up that grammar and lengthening it would be great!

Yes, continue.

As the others said before. The story is funny and has good potential, however you shouldn't leave any dead links and finish it properly. Also there isn't to seem any difference between Paul and Joseph.

You should continue this, really, but dead-end links are ANNOYING.

The originality is raw. IF you can refine this then you got a good story.

Dude there are dead ends fix those and they would be pretty decent.