Player Comments on A Day in the Life of Firestar
Its okay its just short. I love Warrior Cats based story's like this but this one is really short, You could click the bottom thing three times and be done.
on 8/20/2015 7:56:22 PM with a score of 0
No plot, and it's short. I thought this was really boring. You could do better. (Almost said cloud instead of could.)
on 7/28/2015 7:26:52 PM with a score of 0
I just have something to add; you called the deputy Bramblestar. I don't know if anyone else noticed this, but I just figured I'd point it out.
on 7/16/2015 12:39:19 PM with a score of 0
It could have more to it but its good
on 7/12/2015 6:31:53 AM with a score of 0
-- LOLLY on 7/9/2015 11:03:16 PM with a score of 0
This was really short, and I couldn't really figure out HOW this was a spoiler...
on 6/23/2015 4:45:37 PM with a score of 0
-- stormtail on 6/8/2015 6:00:54 PM with a score of 0
-- WAFFLEMAN on 6/7/2015 7:51:01 PM with a score of 0
Wait...how was this a spoiler? It was just short. No SUSPENSE!
on 6/5/2015 5:46:38 PM with a score of 0
I would have wanted to actually read this, but last hope isn't even out in Finland.
I'll get back to this a couple years later, if it hasn't been deleted.
Dark river isn't even out!
on 5/24/2015 6:15:41 AM with a score of 0
This had no plot at all. You make choices that don't effect the story and there are way too many grammar and spelling mistakes. I'm sorry but I have to say, this is a piece of crap. Put more effort into it
on 5/23/2015 1:51:08 PM with a score of 0
What the heck is this?
-- Fiercerose on 5/14/2015 6:15:46 PM with a score of 0
Ok, no offense but...WHAT IS THIS SUPPOSED TO BE
on 5/2/2015 6:23:18 PM with a score of 0
on 5/2/2015 3:06:17 PM with a score of 0
It was very good, but I see a fair amount of wasted effort. It could be better, but it was a good effort. 5/8. :)
on 4/25/2015 2:31:51 PM with a score of 0
okay...um...idk what to say about this.... it could have been better
on 4/24/2015 4:16:15 PM with a score of 0
Not that good ... But I'm not not good at making these ethier
on 4/23/2015 9:04:25 PM with a score of 0
it WAS funner than homework... still crap
on 4/20/2015 6:05:35 PM with a score of 0
Really good, I like the Warriors books by Erin Hunter.
on 4/15/2015 9:02:56 PM with a score of 0
Could be better. I see a lot of wasted potachal. You could do better. Try again!
-- Ginger on 3/25/2015 11:55:24 AM with a score of 0
-- Ginger on 3/25/2015 11:51:23 AM with a score of 0
no offense but... BORING!
-- blah on 3/18/2015 7:15:25 PM with a score of 0
I liked it for a WC story, but it was very short and accurately, I do believe that Onestar and Firestar aren't enemies, or hostile towards each other. Overall, it was alright, but has potential for improvement.
on 3/13/2015 11:13:20 AM with a score of 0
nothing much, it was short, not a lot of options, plot was worse then It could have been, but oh well. over all it was horribly BORING!
1/2 out of 10 fresh-kill
-- me on 3/7/2015 2:17:39 PM with a score of 0
It was way too short, and the grammar was slightly off. By the way, you accidentally put Bramblestar instead of Brambleclaw on one page.
on 2/18/2015 11:10:27 AM with a score of 0
1/8, simply for being a WC game, also it's bad.
on 2/12/2015 5:16:09 PM with a score of 0
on 1/31/2015 7:01:10 PM with a score of 0
That was short, yet sweet, but more options would be nice. Otherwise, well done.
on 1/25/2015 5:51:13 PM with a score of 0
I wish there were more options, and that the story was longer.
on 1/18/2015 10:11:43 PM with a score of 0
Interesting...very interesting...I give it a 3/8, for it's definitely not worth deleting.
on 12/28/2014 9:24:20 AM with a score of 0
Do Not Read
I warned you
on 12/24/2014 6:23:30 AM with a score of 0
It was good. But I really didn't know what to do. It is not like Firestar to just go to the WC camp because they didn't mark their borders...
on 12/19/2014 4:58:34 PM with a score of 0
Kinda boring, nothing really awful there. I suggest going to ShadowClan, or something like that.
-- Nutpelt on 10/26/2014 10:37:11 AM with a score of 0
It was ok, it didn't really get me into the story though.
on 10/7/2014 8:30:50 AM with a score of 0
Um,I didn't like it.It was boring,there was hardly any action,plus it was short.I think you should put more time into this,and maybe add,more detail about the surroundings and the cats.
-- Winterfrost105 on 9/28/2014 6:28:55 PM with a score of 0
Not much to do
-- CinderClaw on 9/13/2014 9:30:41 AM with a score of 0
it would be better if it was longer.
-- flamefeather on 9/5/2014 10:45:02 PM with a score of 0
I enjoyed the story personally but two things, 1, You mentioned naps way too much, 2, That is too short to be a whole day of Firestar's life.
on 9/1/2014 4:45:13 PM with a score of 0
This story looked better than most warrior cat stories but it sorta ends for no reason. And when I see something suspicious, I chose to walk back to camp, my character said he saw nothing. Why?
on 7/25/2014 9:17:15 AM with a score of 0
Not more of this garbage!
on 7/25/2014 8:50:17 AM with a score of 0
It was okay but... What was the point? not enogh options either.
on 7/9/2014 4:41:11 PM with a score of 0
Pretty nice, I like how you based it on one actual cat.
on 6/16/2014 7:25:11 PM with a score of 0
-- Sparrowpool on 6/13/2014 2:21:08 PM with a score of 0
on 6/9/2014 9:30:44 AM with a score of 0
I enjoyed it, but I didn't really get it. But good story game! Maybe add more, though.
on 5/2/2014 6:17:30 PM with a score of 0
It was too short and ended with nothing really happening. And why would Firestar attack onestar? They were good friends!
-- Emberheart on 4/25/2014 10:15:55 PM with a score of 0
FIRESTAR WOULD NEVER HURT ONESTAR UNLESS HE ABSOLUTELY HAD TOO!!! Then again, Firestar and Onestar started to lose friendship…but they still wouldn't hurt each other!!!
on 4/20/2014 6:23:23 PM with a score of 0
Firestar is peaceful! He would not hurt Onestar! What was that about?!
on 4/12/2014 10:54:06 AM with a score of 0
It was a bit boring... It needs to have some kind of problem they are trying to face. (Sorry if they did and I just picked the wrong things)
on 4/12/2014 10:50:27 AM with a score of 0
I like warriors by Erin hunter, but Firestar doesn't really take naps. So what was that for?
on 3/23/2014 10:52:19 AM with a score of 0
soooo many horrible warrior cats games...
on 3/7/2014 10:26:27 AM with a score of 0
on 3/6/2014 1:12:48 PM with a score of 0
Weird, for a second there the game actually seemed a bit better than the other Warrior Cats games... But then it just sort of ended with nothing really happening.
on 3/6/2014 3:14:25 AM with a score of 0
Hmm. Interesting. For a CAT named "FIREstar", it's peculiar that he would "feel his cheeks begin to burn".
on 3/5/2014 8:16:24 PM with a score of 0