Player Comments on DnD backstory creation

Once you realize this is for character creation and not for outright storytelling, this is pretty impressive.

I thought a game with the play length of 5 would be longer.

I disliked it less than I expected. For what it's worth, you put a little time in it with all the pages.

If you put that effort into more of an actual story, you could have something solid.

Hmm..not a quiz, Mizal. More of a RPG character setup.

Anyways, I'm not entirely sure why you made this, Anubis,but if it was for a specific person/group of people, you should just put the story on sneak preview and link it to the people.
If not, well, this isn't CYS material and will be taken down soon, anyways.

I was hoping my 1000th point would be gained rating something with a bit more substance or entertainment value, but eh, I'm not picky.

This isn't a story just FYI. I guess it could count as a quiz, but it needs more content either way. 1/8 length = might as well unpublish, in every example I've seen.