Player Comments on High School! Update 1.0.

This needs to be longer too. Take time to flesh out the characters and make a plot. It can take a while sometimes but it'll be worth it.
-- corgi213 on 10/17/2015 8:19:44 AM with a score of 0
"...the next update will be coming soon. So stay tuned!"

^This is the source of all wrong and evil in this world.
-- Aducan on 10/17/2015 6:11:07 AM with a score of 0
Honestly, there really wasn't a point to this story. Good stories, regardless of length need conflict, plot and good characterization. The author needs to give the reader a reason to care about what is happening.
-- Bucky on 10/16/2015 10:41:49 PM with a score of 0
I'm not trying to be mean here, but I did not find this even remotely interesting. There are countless stories than can be told because the imagination has limitless possibilities and yes, many of them have been written on this site, but a good writer knows what kind of stories are worth telling. Just a thought.
-- Kiel_Farren on 10/16/2015 9:25:12 PM with a score of 0
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