Player Comments on High School! Update 1.0.

This needs to be longer too. Take time to flesh out the characters and make a plot. It can take a while sometimes but it'll be worth it.

"...the next update will be coming soon. So stay tuned!"

^This is the source of all wrong and evil in this world.

Honestly, there really wasn't a point to this story. Good stories, regardless of length need conflict, plot and good characterization. The author needs to give the reader a reason to care about what is happening.

I'm not trying to be mean here, but I did not find this even remotely interesting. There are countless stories than can be told because the imagination has limitless possibilities and yes, many of them have been written on this site, but a good writer knows what kind of stories are worth telling. Just a thought.