corgi213, The Dramatist

Member Since

4/25/2015

Last Activity

1/17/2019 1:01 PM

EXP Points

756

Post Count

500

Storygame Count

2

Duel Stats

9 wins / 6 losses

Order

Marauder

Commendations

27

My story writing focus is mainly on horror,adventure, and now apparently fantasy.

According to some it's easier to remember me as the Tumble guy.

 

Quotes

"And if you want to write some very strange porn involving Steve, go ahead, I'm not gonna judge ... you weirdo." - Mayana

"God dammit, Corgi." - Steve

"The only problem with Corgi's story was the lack of branching for the most part.
Didn't mind it in general"
-EndMaster

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Storygames

The Last Chieftain

The land of Orcin, a place where all are free to live as they wish as long as they follow the laws of the council.  Years of relative peace had ensued, making sure the orcs would live as strong and as free as they had always been.

The Mannate Empire, destined to consume everything on the horizon, sets its sights on the homeland of the orcs.  Annexing one kingdom, one empire after the next, finally looks to orcin for resources, troops, and land to settle, as they prepare their dreaded march.

Nolazir, a simple orc, who lives off the land as he works his farm, unknowingly would be drawn into events to come.  He would come to shape the world around him, and the future of Orcin.  

Fight for honor, love, peace, and prosperity.  Lead with a cruel fist, or a warm heart.  Challenges and tribulations lay ahead for all. 

Will you save your homeland and return it from the brink?  Will you let the darkness within and without consume you?  What becomes of you and the world, is up to you.

The next edition will come out in a few months, filled with more varied events between time jumps including, politics, monsters, and more!  Also will be adding the rest of the real story and the side branches in as well.

Special Thanks

Where to begin exactly?  I'll start off with thanking Mizal, who helped me with some proof reading and structure at the start, and helping me figure out how to use variables.  Also for always being willing to help with my writing, grammar, and developing characters all these years, and generally being a wonderful presence on this site :)

I would like to thank MoreCowbell for consistently proofreading and giving me feedback on my story throughout this long process.  I appreciate all of your spell checking, helping keep the flow and pace, and general positivity and motivation during this whole project. 

I would like to thank 3iguy for taking an interest in my story and beta reading it for me.  As well as Ebon for his detailed and insightful responses to some of my threads early on.

I'd also like to thank Ogre, IAP for encouraging me and keeping me motivated during the hardest parts of the process (mostly the end point).

Also would like to thank EndMaster for letting me rip off his organization scheme for storygames.

I really couldn't have done this without you guys, and I owe a great part of finally finishing this to all of you and to CYS as a general whole.

I hope you all enjoy!


The Pie

One guy on a quest...for magic crytals!  Unfortunately this is the land of Cystia...and things almost never happen as expected.  

What starts as a normal day turns into a mad quest for revenge, live the life of a dude turned into an evil....killer pie!

Will you find redemption?  Or will you truly be evil? No one cares!  


Asylum of Hunters
unpublished

Guide Us, Flames
unpublished

Invidia
unpublished

A dispute, a broken promise.  The envy of one will break a kingdom.  

The half man, half dragon sorcerer Tarragon threatens your king, your home, your very way of life.  

How far will you go to make sure justice is brought to this foul madman?

Chose between to very different characters to embark on this epic quest, slay the dragon, save the princess, and restore honor to your kingdom.


Quarry
unpublished

Come, rest your weary feet. 
Sit by the campfire, warm those hands.  You must be tired.  
Oh, you like stories do you?
Hmm, here's a story for you.  One that goes way back, to a time when the night ruled, and the howling of beasts would make any man tremble.  Relax, it's going to be a long one.


Scourge
unpublished

An orc named Tumble, young, wild, and free.  

Life is great in a village nestled in between the mountains, the birth place of the great Orc race.  But for the past century a series of brutal crusades have left them divided and broken.

The Mannate Empire threatens to swallow them whole, just as it has done with everyone else in its path.  But then one day an even bigger threat to the land rises out of the fires of fate, undeterred by the ravages of time. 

They call him Scourge.  His forces threaten the very land, and all of life as it stands now.  

Will Tumble play the role fate has dealt him and stop the evil Scourge?

Or will he abandon the world before him and find his own way?


Torchlight
unpublished


Yet Another Freaking Wolf Story
unpublished

Recent Posts

The Risorgimento on 1/14/2019 11:13:07 AM

I was pretty much thinking about the s or z thing the whole time I was typing that out but at that point kinda said screw it, I'll just post it now lol


The Risorgimento on 1/13/2019 4:16:36 PM

The Flase Damsel Critique

He comes down hard, buring the blade in the orcs neck/ should be burying the blade in the orcs neck.

Seems weird at first that he would be worried about her thinking be called her a monster, but it's good use of foreshadowing.

Seems like if she could get in there just fine she might not need some knight in shining armor escorting her around, although this kinda refers to itself later

The outside the the temple looked small/ should be From the outside the temple looked small.

The whole "uhh, I think you're lost" part is pretty funny, so is her later on asking him if he thinks she is helpless, then he goes "are you HuRt!?"

"Don't bother, I paralyzed you sweetie" cool line, but I think you put an s where the z should be in paralyzed.

You seem to do a good job building up the thought of the king being terrifying....but then don't describe him in horrifying detail.

"I'm gonna have to cut him open to find our (should be out)"

I really liked the twist in this, it was a little bit predictable as he was avoiding his questions, but that's okay.  I don't suppose it was entirely supposed to be a surprise.

The way it plays on the knight's pride and the dainty woman named Rose actually being a horrific monster was cool.


Dino-Knights on 1/12/2019 2:31:34 PM

Read this days ago, but interesting review by the way.


CYS Quest: The Greatest Story Never Told! on 1/12/2019 2:16:02 PM

This would have been amazing!


I was told I should introduce myself on 1/11/2019 7:04:49 PM

Wuff


I was told I should introduce myself on 1/11/2019 12:59:19 PM

Welcome, you seem like you will do just fine here. In time you will see examples of what not to do, and the idiots mentioned. But all you will really need to do is sit back and laugh at them with the rest of us.


The Many Fates Of Hjordis on 1/9/2019 8:49:37 PM

Cool AND fancy!


Corgi's Unofficial Contest: The Lords of the Land on 1/9/2019 4:30:16 PM

Edit:

Clam

Ford

Samyers


Corgi's Unofficial Contest: The Lords of the Land on 1/9/2019 4:29:52 PM

Awesome! Glad to have you Clam and Ford.


Corgi's Unofficial Contest: The Lords of the Land on 1/9/2019 3:13:17 PM

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Cricket
3iguy
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ShoujoAddict
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