corgi213, The Dramatist

Member Since

4/25/2015

Last Activity

9/20/2019 5:06 PM

EXP Points

788

Post Count

722

Storygame Count

2

Duel Stats

16 wins / 8 losses

Order

Marauder

Commendations

27

My story writing focus is mainly on horror,adventure, and now apparently fantasy.

According to some, my profile description is a horrid mess! :)

 

Quotes

"And if you want to write some very strange porn involving Steve, go ahead, I'm not gonna judge ... you weirdo." - Mayana

"God dammit, Corgi." - Steve

"The only problem with Corgi's story was the lack of branching for the most part.
Didn't mind it in general"
-EndMaster

"You idiot, you moron, you complete imbecile"- Mizal

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Storygames

The Last Chieftain

The land of Orcin, a place where all are free to live as they wish as long as they follow the laws of the council.  Years of relative peace had ensued, making sure the orcs would live as strong and as free as they had always been.

The Mannate Empire, destined to consume everything on the horizon, sets its sights on the homeland of the orcs.  Annexing one kingdom, one empire after the next, finally looks to orcin for resources, troops, and land to settle, as they prepare their dreaded march.

Nolazir, a simple orc, who lives off the land as he works his farm, unknowingly would be drawn into events to come.  He would come to shape the world around him, and the future of Orcin.  

Fight for honor, love, peace, and prosperity.  Lead with a cruel fist, or a warm heart.  Challenges and tribulations lay ahead for all. 

Will you save your homeland and return it from the brink?  Will you let the darkness within and without consume you?  What becomes of you and the world, is up to you.

The next edition will come out in a few months, filled with more varied events between time jumps including, politics, monsters, and more!  Also will be adding the rest of the real story and the side branches in as well.

Special Thanks

Where to begin exactly?  I'll start off with thanking Mizal, who helped me with some proof reading and structure at the start, and helping me figure out how to use variables.  Also for always being willing to help with my writing, grammar, and developing characters all these years, and generally being a wonderful presence on this site :)

I would like to thank MoreCowbell for consistently proofreading and giving me feedback on my story throughout this long process.  I appreciate all of your spell checking, helping keep the flow and pace, and general positivity and motivation during this whole project. 

I would like to thank 3iguy for taking an interest in my story and beta reading it for me.  As well as Ebon for his detailed and insightful responses to some of my threads early on.

I'd also like to thank Ogre, IAP for encouraging me and keeping me motivated during the hardest parts of the process (mostly the end point).

Also would like to thank EndMaster for letting me rip off his organization scheme for storygames.

I really couldn't have done this without you guys, and I owe a great part of finally finishing this to all of you and to CYS as a general whole.

I hope you all enjoy!


The Pie

One guy on a quest...for magic crytals!  Unfortunately this is the land of Cystia...and things almost never happen as expected.  

What starts as a normal day turns into a mad quest for revenge, live the life of a dude turned into an evil....killer pie!

Will you find redemption?  Or will you truly be evil? No one cares!  


Asylum of Hunters
unpublished

Twin Flames flicker and writhe, dancing around each other as they cast their glorious rays.  One pale and the other dark, in a dance that has gone on for eternity.

Deep in the city of Kalamak, the Necromancer Nemus stands, surrounded by a host of undead guards as he torments the once proud people of the city.  The city patrolled by the beasts and minions of the vampire lord, Yorn.  Underneath the city lies an evil of unimaginable horror, this evil rests where no mortal shall ever live.

In the darkest of flames, a hope sparks, a pale flame may bring a new day to the people of Kalamak.

Enter the city, find the Order of Hunters, stop Nemus.  You alone can do this, do not fail as others have, stop the mad man before it is too late.


Attack of the Savoids
unpublished

Dark-Brite
unpublished

My entry for Mizal's Lone Hero Contest.


Dream Walker
unpublished

Forge
unpublished

In the wild, beastly lands of Velis Brum, many are prey to the whims and cruelty of men and monster alike.

A small village resides in the caves Manchor Vanit, it is here you have been born. Taught to remain close to the caves all of your life, you never caught a glimpse of what was beyond the mountains, and when you did it was often cruel and unsettling.

Your mostly quiet existence would end when Baglich would come to take your homeland, with their scum and barbarian fiends.

Gather family, allies, old foes, and create an empire suitable to standing up to this terror of the land.


Guide Us, Flames
unpublished

Invidia
unpublished

A dispute, a broken promise.  The envy of one will break a kingdom.  

The half man, half dragon sorcerer Tarragon threatens your king, your home, your very way of life.  

How far will you go to make sure justice is brought to this foul madman?

Chose between to very different characters to embark on this epic quest, slay the dragon, save the princess, and restore honor to your kingdom.


Necronanny
unpublished

Evil Grannies Galore!


Quarry
unpublished

Come, rest your weary feet. 
Sit by the campfire, warm those hands.  You must be tired.  
Oh, you like stories do you?
Hmm, here's a story for you.  One that goes way back, to a time when the night ruled, and the howling of beasts would make any man tremble.  Relax, it's going to be a long one.


Sanctus Damnatorum
unpublished

Scourge
unpublished

An orc named Tumble, young, wild, and free.  

Life is great in a village nestled in between the mountains, the birth place of the great Orc race.  But for the past century a series of brutal crusades have left them divided and broken.

The Mannate Empire threatens to swallow them whole, just as it has done with everyone else in its path.  But then one day an even bigger threat to the land rises out of the fires of fate, undeterred by the ravages of time. 

They call him Scourge.  His forces threaten the very land, and all of life as it stands now.  

Will Tumble play the role fate has dealt him and stop the evil Scourge?

Or will he abandon the world before him and find his own way?


Vigilant
unpublished

A hero watches over the city they love. Origing story occurs and some other generic hero shit, probably with a twist.


Yet Another Freaking Wolf Story
unpublished

Zombpocalypse
unpublished

An exercise in seeing how fast I can crank one of these out.


Recent Posts

Defeat my Students! on 9/20/2019 9:46:38 AM

If Gower can single handedly win the super bowl he can single handedly defeat his class in combat WHILE drinking tea.


Defeat my Students! on 9/19/2019 3:43:32 PM

Mara you have an excuse to not have done so well at least


Tally Ho, Chapter Two on 9/19/2019 11:21:49 AM

2


Tally Ho, Chapter Two on 9/18/2019 9:46:51 PM

3

Fuck Figs and his nasty sandwich hands


Tally Ho, Chapter Two on 9/18/2019 9:42:45 PM

Lmao this is great


Tally Ho, Chapter Two on 9/18/2019 11:43:42 AM

Never again will Alfred Pennyworth fly second class with those lower class...well, scumbags.

Also, should we make gentle love to Mopsie under the stars while we're at it?

In any case, 3


Tally Ho, Chapter Two on 9/17/2019 1:57:51 PM

2 in the hopes she makes a fool of herself/but if she comes back with it successfully I will not be happy at her smugness

Option 4 pls


Tally Ho, Chapter Two on 9/16/2019 10:32:07 PM

Doing things on a whim with no thought or reflection? Foul, base, beast you are!


We Are Helven on 9/16/2019 10:31:00 PM

I actually have something like that planned out, and while its less of a confrontation it'll be pretty clear there's a shift in overall values once it happens.

And yeah I was thinking he should be able to run a stable kingdom, and not have everyone hate him.  I do want him to have some fanatical minions and followers after all.  

And regarding the last part that certainly plays a factor into multiple aspects of the story, and the Helven timeline.  Things I really want to share but I think it's all gonna play out epically.

Think I might write the next part now that some of the ideas are fresh in my mind.  


We Are Helven on 9/16/2019 10:05:55 PM

Yeah you commended them lol, forgot to let you know

Mmm, probably a couple of years

And yeah, he didn't seem as even keeled as I would have liked him to be.  OG Malakar was more of a dick, and while this one still is I would say making him a bit more mellow suits him better.