Player Comments on Puppet without strings

Really cool story idea. I enjoyed it a lot, even if the grammar was a little bad. I'm guessing English is your second language, so well done.
-- October on 3/28/2011 7:22:47 AM with a score of 0
Your storyline is really well thought out and awesome. Your execution is poor because the writing is incoherent. You're missing words and your grammar is terrible. Is English your second language? If so, this is an absolutely awesome story. I gave it a 5 because I really love the storyline. Just as a side note, I don't think this is long enough to warrant splitting it off into a sequel. Generally, as a rule of thumb, a story should be about 200 pages long before that's even thought of.
-- JJJ-thebanisher on 8/9/2010 6:54:44 PM with a score of 0
I really liked the concept and storyline. My main complaint would be general mistakes in grammar and writing style. Still, I had fun reading this story and I hope you make other parts to it.
-- Utopia on 7/18/2010 2:35:29 PM with a score of 0
I really enjoy the premise to your story, and it's surprisingly well written for someone to whom English is a second language. Next time, you might consider working with someone else on the site who can edit it for you, to help make the story work as best as it can in English. Other than that, I just wish it was longer because I really enjoyed it but it was over too quick.
-- Glandros on 12/10/2017 2:29:26 PM with a score of 0
Overall, it had a few errors but I loved the story line.

-- Snowflame on 4/9/2017 9:14:54 PM with a score of 0
Definitely a good story.
-- lolitup4 on 3/30/2016 3:23:39 PM with a score of 0
I want a sequel please. :D
-- Isambard on 10/5/2015 12:00:38 PM with a score of 0
I really liked it. Has a nice plot and storyline looking foward to next installment. Spelling was a bit off but not horribly.
-- hugo23 on 3/29/2013 2:32:14 AM with a score of 0
Twas good but it needs some corrections in the grammar.
-- SomeDude on 1/25/2013 10:19:04 AM with a score of 0
Loved the story. 6/8
-- Xt1000305 on 11/18/2012 10:11:44 PM with a score of 0
Okay, but I would like a sequel.
-- Swiftstryker on 10/3/2012 2:03:11 AM with a score of 0
I died with honor!
-- RobustSporadic on 7/1/2012 8:09:43 AM with a score of 0
make a sequel
-- CovElite on 5/16/2012 12:19:24 AM with a score of 0
I couldn't understand it at all. It seemed like a good story but I was so confused. Need to write better english.
-- bradhal on 11/11/2011 5:04:06 PM with a score of 0
Amazing plot. The writing was a bit off, but overall great job.
-- Killer999 on 5/20/2011 11:21:39 AM with a score of 0
i was confused half the time and you had a few mispelled words.
-- fergie14233 on 8/14/2010 2:19:19 PM with a score of 0
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