Swiftstryker, The Wordsmith
Member Since
10/17/2011
Last Activity
6/20/2013 1:56 AM
EXP Points
Post Count
4204
Storygame Count
0
Duel Stats
10
wins
/
15
losses
I don't think I'll be making much storygames, if any. Rather, I'll be supplementing the forums with forum-games, since they are much more changeable, and collaborative.
The pict I have is by Arcelle from the Spiral Knights website. She decided to test her drawing abilities on my Spiral Knights account, Vinnydime.
I'm not the most decorated member of the site, nor do I have much experience. Despite this, I can revise and re-word your story to make it sound that better.
Trophies Earned
Storygames
Candied Apples?
unpublished
A fairly short and easy story to read for all ages. Go ahead and read :D.
Items Test.
unpublished
Items Test.
Quickbite #1
unpublished
REALLY short story. Just finish the story, and give a critique on:
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Recent Posts
Mage Battle Terrain : Jungle on 6/20/2013 1:49:58 AMShe only raises her eyebrow sardonically to warn him of the incoming offenders.
Mage Battle Terrain : Jungle
on 6/20/2013 1:39:50 AM
She glares at the men in detest, and floats up a tree, and sits among the branches.
Mage Battle Terrain : Jungle
on 6/20/2013 1:19:04 AM
The girl wakes up again, and looks around her. She hears the noises of combat, and so she walks through the brush to find...
Oh god. More wizards fighting.
The Tavern: Reaping of a soul (continuation)
on 6/20/2013 12:59:24 AM
OOC: You're still ignoring my threads =.=
SOFLB: Another Day Passed
on 6/20/2013 12:46:56 AM
When Kira arrives, she looks around the room, and notices the demon. She covers her mouth with her hands in fright.
Mage Battle Terrain : Jungle
on 6/20/2013 12:16:19 AM
A cloud of mist poofs out from the floor, and re-forms the unconscious girl from before.
The Tavern: Reaping of a soul (continuation)
on 6/19/2013 11:15:36 PM
OOC: What about the electric shock from the threads?
Mage battle II
on 6/19/2013 10:50:57 PM
The mist climbs higher and higher into the air, but it slows down as the bugs, and the poison catch up...
The girl reforms, her eyes glazed, and she begins to plummet down...
Dawn of Worlds: First Age
on 6/19/2013 10:48:07 PM
So that's...-2.
Which leaves me with one dinky point :D
Wait....NEVER MIND.
That's a -3, leaving me with zero. Next turn I'll make it into a rainforest XD
The Tavern: Reaping of a soul (continuation)
on 6/19/2013 10:32:52 PM
The threads, although weakened, begin to hum with electricity.
The threads are too weak, however, to withstand the minute amounts of magic, and the whole room in the tavern begins to crackle with lightning. It might give a slight shock to people, but it will effect the doused ones at most.
