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This storygame was confusing.
Most of the building options lead you to die. The narrator told you how you died, but I didn't know why I did. There needed to be more detail on how I died.
On the first page, it was the neutral setting for a first-page storygame. Were you trying to break the fourth wall? Did you not know how to change it?
Overall, this storygame made no sense. There were tons of spelling mistakes (if English isn't your first language, that's fine) and I could tell there was no actual effort put into this. 1/8.

needs more words to say more stuff.

You are a expariment that mKes matarilials in caves. Don't let appearances fool you, it is written in an Alien old retarded language only similar to English by coincidence