mazdark, The Reader

Member Since

4/26/2016

Last Activity

10/19/2019 7:53 AM

EXP Points

95

Post Count

90

Storygame Count

0

Duel Stats

5 wins / 7 losses

Order

Sage

Commendations

0

status : alive

Honestly, there's not much I need or want to say about me. Long time lurker, currently writing my first storygame, which will be accessible in sneak prev. One day.

current improvement objectives:

- general English

- pace in description and sentences length

- motivation 

 

Well, I guess that's all; feel free to pm me if you have a question or for any other trivial matter.

quotes that inspire me :

- "I know, when time comes, to leave the lion's hide to take one of fox " - Napoleon Bonaparte
- "Under the unending avalanche of trivial information, no one knows where to find interesting ones" - Bernard Werber (french writer)

"J’allais sous le ciel, Muse ! et j’étais ton féal ;
Oh ! là ! là ! que d’amours splendides j’ai rêvées !"

 

L'empereur se tourna vers Dieu ; l'homme de gloire
Trembla ; Napoléon comprit qu'il expiait
Quelque chose peut-être, et, livide, inquiet,
Devant ses légions sur la neige semées :
« Est-ce le châtiment, dit-il. Dieu des armées ? »
Alors il s'entendit appeler par son nom
Et quelqu'un qui parlait dans l'ombre lui dit : Non

Recent Posts

Noob Swarm on 10/10/2019 5:49:02 AM

You can publish it if you want, it's just that it's not necessary to do so. Usually the classes are middle schoolers or high schoolers, hence the article. But if you want reviews from us you can publish it.

Also... a man's house filled with ducks... is that a reference to a video from a guy named James Veitch ?


Noob Swarm on 10/10/2019 5:22:13 AM

If that's a hobby of yours, sure. But I guess she was just referring to the points you earn when you rate a game.


Noob Swarm on 10/10/2019 5:07:58 AM

Send them with money. Corruption is encouraged here. Note that if the bribe is disappointing, we'll see that you're made an example.


Noob Swarm on 10/10/2019 5:05:23 AM

I guess your teacher didn't get the memo...
http://chooseyourstory.com/help/articles/article.aspx?ArticleId=4296

It's possible to enable "sneak preview" so that your teacher can review your works without you publishing them.


Proof read/feedback on long fantasy adventure on 10/7/2019 8:04:37 AM

Oh you're still at it? That's great! I remember reading the first few pages (I guess there were 5 or 6) around a year, and it was interesting, and quite well written. I have great expectations so this better be good!


I need $2000 on 9/25/2019 5:20:50 AM

I don't need your damn money! 


Tally Ho, Chapter Two on 9/18/2019 6:55:29 AM

option 1; let's not give him false hopes

 


Let's Play: Tally Ho, by Gower on 9/12/2019 8:11:12 AM

Oh I'm sorry, I should have paid more attention to the whole thread. That was extremely clumsy of me.
Wish you courage to go through all of this and be sure that even if it isn't much we think of you and we're here to talk if you need to.


The Warriors on 9/9/2019 10:31:16 AM

You swear what. It's the internet, lad. Suck it up. Write at least a thousand words, and come back to us for reviewing .

 


The Warriors on 9/9/2019 10:20:42 AM

It's not that he doesn't like this. It's that there is nothing to like.