Player Comments on First of Trillions

It feels like the Prologue for a longer dark fantasy storygame.

I'm a bit disappointed that there wasn't more to this storygame. There were some great choices to begin with, but none of them seemed to have much of an impact on the actual storygame. I assumed that choosing the emotion would have some impact...but the only one I was able to notice was the fact that I couldn't choose to destroy if I didn't choose anger.

The opening scene was a really engaging one, although I didn't get a lot of information about the world or the characters...or even the creature I was following (though my mind was picturing a giant insectlike creature).

I can't say that this storygame had a truly satisfactory ending either, as I didn't find an answer as to why all of the eggs had been destroyed, or why the killers had targeted them.

On the whole, this storygame actually did stir a mix of those two emotions within me - anger and confusion - so that choice was a nice touch. But I'd love to see this expanded upon, with more glimpses of the world and more ability to learn about the characters.

Sharp, snappy and rhythmic writing is the surest way to make the most out of the time limit! This was very enjoyable. I was intrigued. The story feeds the reader bits and pieces as the story goes on and we get closer to the truth, as well as our chosen method of finding the truth. I am not sure the kill/mercy choices in the beginning make much of a difference in the end but it would feel more intense and definite if once the reader killed, your reputation and choices would change.

Very nice!

Considering how little time you had, it's really good!

It's a good game with a good deal of lore, especially considering the circumstances it was made in. I'd like to see more of this world in the future. 6/8