Player Comments on The Insanity Complex

This is quite ambitious for your first story, and quite successful as far as I'm concerned. Your scripting/items worked smoothly and your writing is up to par. If you can incorporate some more meaningful choices and more difficulty or complexity into your next story, it will surely be worthy of even greater accolades.

it ok

It was very fun, but it took a while to figure out what to do in the ending sequence.

Umm...The game was okayish.The exit was a little hard to navigate.Had 3 runs with the game,a slightly varying experience but nothing drastic.

Good for one shotting through.

Stalke Welsh Strikes Again.

It was very good. Like every story, it had a few grammatical and spelling errors, but here they were few and far between. 'Pyjamas' was one of the ones that I noticed, but it was not too bad anywhere, really....
I liked the concept; it was a really good idea for a story game, and like Loon said, it is good for a first game. This was made quite a long time ago, but you still have my review.
I gave it 6/8.

I really enjoyed this game. Each situation feels natural and realistic and gives the reader a sense of freedom.

good job on this one

I was surprised by the good plot and great gameplay. I only wanted more to play.

This game is very well written

Good use of the advanced editors. I wish there had been more attention paid to minor details like the spelling. I would have minimized the number of useless items as well.

Awesome!

I stayed in a wacky ward twice. I'm better now..seriously.

i escaped! you need to add a score, though.

I found one typo. Other than that, it's still a great game. This time I figured out how to escape.

This is a fun game. I like the premise and execution. There's a good use of objects, but not so many objects that you don't know what to do with them all. I didn't figure it out, off to re-try.

It's ok.

Cliffhanger. Rated perfect 7/8.

Quite good. My only real criticism is that some of the items I found didn't seem to do anything, but apart from that, a well written story. 6/8

It's a pretty good story with a good a good environment to explore. However I wish this story, as well as many stories, didn't put me in the role of someone before telling me who that person was. How about some characterization before we begin? Like an introduction to the character, because surely you don't expect me to buy that whatever the character is doing, I would do in real life. I believe I would do things differently. Not to mention I am not of that gender either, which completely kills any connection I could possibly have with the character.

Wow. That was super hard to get out of there. I honestly would've stayed, cuz Tina is obviously a little crazy, but I can deal with escaping.

Even though I failed at the first hurdle this was well written and definitely recommendable.

Quite interesting, with great writing. I could feel myself being absorbed into the story. Really good.

I have to say, this one made me a bit nervous. I've actually had the experience of waking up in a hospital and not knowing how I got there. (It was a standard hospital, not an asylum.) But I'm curious to see what happens next.

This was EXTREMELY well-made for your first story. Well done, chap.

This Story-game is great, I can't believe this your first. I need to work hard in order to make mine that good.
Anyway the story hooks you in from the very moment you play.
It has a good amount of pages for this type of story as well. the only part i disliked was the 'escape' scene, the game never gave a good indication that you needed to use the ID card at 'that' (I'm not gonna spoil it) particular spot, therefor I had to play that part 4 times before i got it.

I look forward to see you continue this series.

WOW! This is your first story?! This is incredible! I especially liked how you did the escape scene. It was very suspenseful, and I am very exited for the next chapter.

Fun stuff!

This game is awesome! I'm really, really interested in the character and can't wait to read the net part of the series. Please let me know if you ever need any help with scripting or anything. Very few mistakes and none that took away from the quality of the game for me. Most series I usually recommend that the writer writes one long story instead of a series of shorter ones, but personally I really like this as a series. I actually think it works better this way since it leaves you hungry for more. Great work! ^_^