Player Comments on FNAF The first night!

This is worse then my storygames, and that's saying a lot. This is short, easy, bad spelling, and even boring! I think most things are exciting, so i think you just should look at storygames, not make them.

— fernflame on 6/18/2015 11:46:42 PM with a score of 0

Time for the best part of your game! At least for me.

<Not responsible for injury/dismeberment.>
You know it's gonna be fun when you see that.

<Just gonna cross that out because thats probably not gonna be a thing after tonight...>
Guess what it was? That's right! Giving a rating higher than 4 on this game!

<A Purple Body looms over your head. He is holding a Freddy Fazbear Suit. Think fast!>
Dave! Weren't you supposed to be stabbing children tonight?

<I DID IT!!!! >
Or did I? I'm using the knife!

<Item cannot be used here.>
Dangit! Worked earlier!

I feel like this review should be longer...

— Rosetail on 6/14/2015 11:14:28 AM with a score of 0

Too short, linear, needs proofreading, and punishes logical choices.

1/8.

— FazzTheMan on 6/13/2015 12:52:03 AM with a score of 0

Played again, it was sad, sorry guys

— Sunpaw on 6/12/2015 10:54:52 PM with a score of 0

He crossed out the world live, because he found out the animatronics move, and he smelled the stench of dried blood, (forgot to add that sorry)

— Sunpaw on 6/6/2015 11:51:40 AM with a score of 0

That was pretty awesome! I LIVED!!!!!

— Terezi_Fan_0611 on 4/29/2015 12:57:07 PM with a score of 0

Aside from minor spelling mistakes, it just sort of jumped into it right away without any sort of story or explanation of what's going on. My character doesn't even seem that bothered.

"You cross out 1 word... Live Just gonna cross that out because thats probably not gonna be a thing after tonight"

What? Why? Why would he think that? He had no reason to.

— Madbrad200 on 4/26/2015 2:41:50 AM with a score of 0

Wait, why did our character right out the word 'live' and cross it out, exactly?

— jamescoker1226 on 4/26/2015 2:39:14 AM with a score of 0

This was way too short for a game or a story.

— Kiel_Farren on 4/25/2015 10:39:03 PM with a score of 0

Pretty good. I SURVIVED!!!!!!!!! Any others?

— Wolfina on 4/25/2015 10:03:49 PM with a score of 0

End link on the first day. :(

You make me sad. I thought this game could actually be okay...

:(

Don't make me sad again :(

— At_Your_Throat on 4/25/2015 9:21:58 PM with a score of 0

>No clear path to victory
>Ending choice on the first page
>Punishes logical choices

= 3/8.