Player Comments on HAMSTER SIMULATOR (Part 1)

Darn snake, I get another turn.

Well naturally, I would not join, and still would not join any shaven fur hammy, I would delete fully carry on being the individual I have been and always will be. "So long shaven hammy's, "I was never yours"!

Well naturally, I would not join, and still would not join any shaven fur hammy, I would delete fully carry on being the individual I have been and always will be. "So long shaven hammy's, "I was never yours"!

This time I was attacked by three hamsters with fur clippers, unfortunately I would never allow them to take my fur. For it's cold out here and I would have to survive, but normally nobody would try to suffocated if they were actually friendly to me, so I chose to fight for my rights, and well if it cost me another chance, if indeed this is a reconcurence, then I'll have to risk it again!

This story was good, but the snake bite, ended my journey any further, to travel in the right direction, that left me with a vent, that came to a sudden stop in my life, fortunately I'm a individual that believes that the snake attack, meant that the game watches out for everyone, and that I get a second chance, to try again since, snaking something usually means to get something or someone out of whatever it is, that is requiring, for it to happen.

This is just like a game of rock, paper and scissors with extra steps. I think each type of hamster should have different abilities.

its been my dream since childhood to be slaughtered by a bird of prey. thanks for making this dream a reality!

The description of this game is a bit off, in that at first you are trying to escape from the humans you live with, not save hamster kind. Also, the 'girl putting you in a pot of boiling water for no apparent reason' scene was a bit random.
Spelling and grammar was mostly there. The fight scenes with rock paper scissors reminded me of Pokemon games.
A good first attempt at a storygame, but it could do with more description on each page and an option to not 'seek revenge' after escaping through the window.

Short pages with the only choice being "continue" can just be merged into one page. If a page is over 1k words, it's worth splitting, but these aren't even 100 words. The real choices are pretty sparse, and mostly lolrandom "you die". I must say, fighting the hawk with RPS was pretty funny, I'll give you that.

Otherwise, the spelling and grammar isn't bad, but there isn't any real prose here. It's just "you go here, you do this". There is very little description until the very final page of the story, and even that could use some more.

On top of that, part 1s are frowned upon because they never turn into a full story (and if they do turn into a full story, then why not just make it one storygame in the first place??)

There is potential, but squirrel simulator is better, sorry.